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Songoffallingfeather [2015-03-04 15:33:50 +0000 UTC]

In panel 2 i think that "That are dogs.." should be "Those are dogs.." and "Redtails" should be "Redtail's"

And in panel 3 "What a luck..." should be "What luck that I didn't let a weakling like you be put to death back then!"

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Ardyo [2013-02-03 18:06:13 +0000 UTC]

Nach dem "I leave them to" hast du das "you" vergessen :3
Ansonsten stimmt bis hierhin alles ^^

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