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Description The "Maxwell Silver Hammer" character design refinement continues! I recently practiced my face-front poses with these four sketches of some of the girls of Walter Mondale Senior High. Among the things I kept in mind:

- Michelle's eyes were originally kind of small and not very expressive. I made them bigger, but retained their Asian appearance (for reference, I studied frames from Disney's Mulan; that seemed to help).
- As I showed in my previous drawing, Abby has facial features that are a little larger than the other girls. I made her ears stick out a bit more from this angle. I also made her eyelashes point inward instead of outward, to constantly give her eyes that downtrodden look.
- To accentuate Jocelyn's tough personality, I changed the shape of her eyes to something more square, so that it looks like she's always got her brow furrowed. I can still loosen it up for those rare moments when she gets sentimental.
- For Ashleigh, who's energetic and very chatty, the first thing that came to mind was that I wanted her to subtly resemble a squirrel. So I enlarged her eyes and gave her a very tiny mouth, which I think not only creates that visual parallel but also makes her a bit cuter.
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Comments: 14

LDLAWRENCE [2009-05-12 01:37:55 +0000 UTC]

Did you ever just get the feeling that people are watching you?

I have to say your redesigns are really good, and that's putting it mildly. Abby looks so deliciously nerdy and Jocelyn looks deliciously evil. (now where have I heard that line before).

Michelle's new look is really sweet! She looks intelligent as well as well..... sensual.

Ashleigh definitely looks like she is a ball of energy powered by Vault..... well Surge since it's the 90's. She really does come off as if she would talk your ear off.

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jbwarner86 In reply to LDLAWRENCE [2009-05-12 01:57:24 +0000 UTC]

Perfect! I knew Abby, Jocelyn, and Ashleigh would convey nerdiness, mischief, and energy, respectively, but I was also hoping Michelle would come across as intelligent - she is a computer science expert, after all! Thanks!

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LDLAWRENCE In reply to jbwarner86 [2009-05-13 01:52:16 +0000 UTC]

Your welcome JB.

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Redmagesalyre [2009-05-12 01:12:27 +0000 UTC]

Nice progress there. It's always good to refine your characters appearances, so they don't look alike, and fit their personalities much better.

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EmperorNortonII [2009-05-12 00:05:22 +0000 UTC]

Love those cute chicks!

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AxleGrease-75 [2009-05-11 23:01:10 +0000 UTC]

Kinda like a beetles album reference

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Yeldarb86 [2009-05-11 20:44:46 +0000 UTC]

I like it.

There's always room for self improvement.

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Doodley [2009-05-11 19:24:32 +0000 UTC]

Great improvements!
Keep up the good work!

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Matt-the-Hydra [2009-05-11 19:14:49 +0000 UTC]

Very smartly done, helping each character to fit into their natural attitude.

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Frobman [2009-05-11 19:08:19 +0000 UTC]

Who wouldn't not want to look~?

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jbwarner86 In reply to Frobman [2009-05-11 19:11:45 +0000 UTC]

Wait...what?

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Frobman In reply to jbwarner86 [2009-05-11 19:53:27 +0000 UTC]

Never mind. Not one of my wittiest comments.

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jbwarner86 In reply to Frobman [2009-05-11 22:24:50 +0000 UTC]

It's okay, everyone has an off day. Artists, neurosurgeons, air traffic controllers...

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QwertyChris [2009-05-11 18:44:26 +0000 UTC]

Hmm, again very splendid progress. 'specially love Michelle's facial features here

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