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jbwarner86 — Toon Town - Story Concept 1

Published: 2007-03-28 16:24:20 +0000 UTC; Views: 4674; Favourites: 37; Downloads: 40
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Description One thing I know I have to do if I want to get "Toon Town" off the ground is create a good introductory story. I've got plenty of others all fleshed out, but I needed one that introduced the premise and the characters without being devoid of plot. The other night, I sketched this drawing of Cleft, Ken, and O'Hare, and it all began to come together...

At the Gryphon Pictures studio in 1945, eccentric director George Frederickson requires a new antagonist for his next Ken Kangaroo cartoon, one who will be a bigger threat. Studio head Lawrence Schlembauer holds a 'toon casting call, and the part goes to muscle-bound Cleft Rockpile. Ken makes an effort to befriend his new costar, but all his attempts at friendliness are construed by Cleft as pure annoyance. It eventually leads Cleft to openly despise Ken both on and off the set, and it's up to Ken's best friend Commander O'Hare to figure out how to smooth things out between the two before Ken gets himself killed.

Assuming that "Toon Town" becomes a comic book (which is the direction I'm leaning towards), this sketch will likely serve as the inspiration for the first issue's cover.
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Comments: 12

Aso-Designer [2010-11-19 21:47:05 +0000 UTC]

hum nice!!!

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Wallaroo [2009-08-25 23:45:39 +0000 UTC]

Whoa... so that's the story of Cleft Rockpile.

A guy like that is to be avoided like the plague.

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Hexit [2007-04-07 19:22:31 +0000 UTC]

Wow. Brilliant posing and dynamics, let alone character design. Dear sir, I approve!

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Lithiumfoxx [2007-04-01 00:48:53 +0000 UTC]

Your clean, warner-ish line work is craziness.

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Lithiumfoxx [2007-04-01 00:48:12 +0000 UTC]

Glad you posted it.

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Scott-da-Hedgehog [2007-03-29 21:55:37 +0000 UTC]

I like how Ken's neck and upper body are all stretched out. Classic toon posing.

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WillFactorMedia [2007-03-29 21:24:05 +0000 UTC]

nice sketch, jb

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jpox [2007-03-29 01:45:19 +0000 UTC]

Great posing and idea!
I like to see how you construct your characters, very cool!

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TailsCorra [2007-03-28 21:28:46 +0000 UTC]

Good work so far. I like how you handle the character's masses, particularly Cleft's muscles and Ken's lower body. Cleft looks genuinely threatening in this picture, while Ken somehow makes me think a lot about Roger Rabbit.

I'm a little confused over O'Hare's exact pose and a bit more about his relationship with the other toons. I imagine both with be fleshed out much more in the final product.

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ThirdPotato [2007-03-28 17:22:17 +0000 UTC]

Aie, your stuff is just so awesome; I so badly want to see it animated on TV, man! XDD But your work also would translate well into comic form; Your stuff is so animated as it is, that even on a 2D page, they'd seem to move. Excellent sense of stretch and squash, a quality most artists have long forgotten in the 'anime' age u.u I love it when you upload stuff XDD Your work is definately one of my favorites on DA. Just such great characters and great expressions all the time!

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QwertyChris [2007-03-28 16:55:48 +0000 UTC]

Heh! Great poses. I love how you made Ken look almost like a sack of flour by how Cleft is clutching him. Brill!

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professorfandango [2007-03-28 16:40:56 +0000 UTC]

AND I SAW IT HERE FIRST.

It's got a good beat and I can dance to it, plus I am enjoying your dynamics.

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