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Published: 2017-06-21 17:00:45 +0000 UTC; Views: 352; Favourites: 40; Downloads: 0
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This is very Artist and Awesome pretty Beautifully....💗🎗💗
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Please note the below critique is my personal opinion and is meant to serve as an outside perspective of your photography and not meant to offend or upset in any way!
Initial Thoughts: An enjoyable and peaceful feeling.. but is my screen dirty?
What I Love: There is a soft lightning wich is not fade at all, fine tones in general and a subtle gradation in the overall picture. Colors and contrast are very well balanced and with a quiet water, your photo delivers us a deep feeling of tranquility. You choose also a meditative point of view with a minimalist composition: water, mountains, some natural elements and the attraction definitly works.
What I Think Needs Work: I don't know what are those dots on your picture (water, sand, dust, or where you behind a window, for example on a boat?) but it's too much distractive. This kind of details can be post-processed if there is not too much of it, but sadly the brightest part of your photo reveals too many spots. The composition between the water and also mountain/sky part could have been more balanced. When you took a picture, you can think about the composition in a "third rule" so your subject (or here, the horizon) will not be in the center and it will delivers an even more dynamic view. For most of cameras, you can also activate an option that lets appear a grid in your viewfinder, and it's really helpful!
Overall Score: 4 / 10 | A photo of a charming point of view that reproduce a peaceful feeling, but the presence of the dots are sadly too much disturbing for me to enjoy it entirely.
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Thank you so much for requesting a critique through The-Photo-Club !
Please note the below critique is my personal opinion and is meant to serve as an outside perspective of your photography and not meant to offend or upset in any way!
Initial Thoughts: What are those dots? D:
What I Love: That dark blue mountain range up against the pale orange sky with those pitch black tree silhouettes <3 I love all those contrasts combined so so much!
What I Think Needs Work: I find myself being seriously distracted by the spots on the photo, I can't be certain but it looks as though the lens was dirty and left spots everywhere. Feel like if this was edited out it would help the photo a lot. I almost think this photo would be stronger is if it was a panorama, if the photo was cropped to have less water the mountains would feel like more of the focus and have much stronger overall look to it I think. Also feel like the upload quality could be higher, it's pixelating in a lot of ares and that takes away from the beautiful photo you took!
Overall Score: 5 / 10 | Lovely sunset photo with great contrast and moody colors, just wish it was a bit higher quality and that the spots weren't distracting away from the view
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