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ShadinaLonesea [2010-12-09 13:10:11 +0000 UTC]
welcome back!
the pic is amazing, when i saw it on my inbox i KNEW it was great. the tones are so well matched, the pose is gorgeous... the ghost horse is very well done, i didn't notice it at first, and when i did, i loved it! Fringe FTW! i knew it couldn't be just another "regular ghost" (if there is such thing), cuz it was too sharp and opaque. i love the concept!
the shadow is well done (good decision, making it blurry and undefined) and well placed too, but i think it woudln't hurt if you made the parts around the hooves (where the feet touch the ground) a little darker, then quickly fading to nothingness. but a job well done, anyway!
i agree with you about the hoofprints. they are incredibly well done (honnest, it beats me! ), but the placement isn't quite right.... since i've never seen a galloping horse's hoofprints IRL, and i haven't been able to goggle them either, i just used my fingers to figure this out:
horse's right hind leg-----> //_________ O_______________O <----- how it should be
(first to land)______________ O ____________O
see? probably not... but one thing you got wrong was the lead leg! the horse is galloping/cantering on the left lead, and your prints seem to belong to a right lead gallop:
O______O
__O_______ O <----- what you've done
second, the spacing between them. your prints seems to belong to a very collected, olympic level canter, while that crazy long legged horse is running at nearly full speed, with probably a long "flying" (suspension) moment, so that the first hind leg will land FAR ahead from where the last front leg took off. in that case, the hoofprints would look like the pattern i've (attempted) to show above, with relativelly evenly spaced prints, then a long gap, then the same pattern again. : i think...
either way, this is an instant fave!
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ShadinaLonesea In reply to jcspenny [2011-01-28 09:39:16 +0000 UTC]
don't apologize, i understand you perfectly. life had this habit of taking us away from what we'd like to be doing...
if i LIKE Fringe?! i'm beyond CRAZY about it (ok, that's kinda of a totally unintentional pun)!!! what i don't get is why there's so little people actually watching and enjoying it! if makes no f****ing sense...
so yeah, any picture that has even the slightest reference to fringe is an instant favorite!
hee hee! believe me when i say that i learn more about shadows and whatnot by watching and criticizing (sp?) others than by actually doing it myself! and if i can help people while i'm at it, awesome!
pffff, please! that was no trouble at all! in fact, that's an exercise i do myself everytime i mess with hoofprints - i put my own fingers in the "pose" i want the horse to be, and try to figure out what marks would it leave. sounds silly, but somehow it works, and i never get the wrong lead that way.
don't thank me, it's a real pleasure!
and welcome back again.
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Sabriel-TS [2010-12-09 05:15:18 +0000 UTC]
<3 It means a lot an I love it.
I like the idea a lot, and the song<3 Lady A rocks. YAY fringe reference! And a good one at that.
I like Opies tail, and Mach's mane. Opie's mane is good too, but it's a bit skimpy, he has a fairly nice lucious mane you know xD not it looks good, not quite him but good. Mach's tail looks a bit funny to me, but I think It's mostly because it's white, and secondly because he's running, and he wasn't really one for running xD but more whispies could help you there ;]
As to your shadow, -sigh- at least it's there. It's very hard to tell with the waves, but I think it's coming from the right side of the image a little bit from the back. Good job with the prints. I agree on the positioning thoguh, it's not quite right, but I don;t know where they should go! I should study that next ;]
THE TEXT! I LOVE IT! it looks amazing, great job.
I love you a lot thanks so much for doing this for me, and leaving it less than 100% perfect so I can have a critique, even thoguh i don't want to critque, cause it's for me and I love it no matter what it looks like, but yeah I do like critiquing too, so yes. thanks you<3
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jcspenny In reply to Sabriel-TS [2010-12-09 16:54:33 +0000 UTC]
I was thinking about that when I picked the song. I know you like country, and I couldn't remember if you had outright mentioned that you like Lady A, but I assumed you did because... well who doesn't!?
That makes sense, Arabs do have nice manes like that. I fail at them, I'm too used to Appy manes. But I'm glad you like the tail, I was worried it was too poofy. Mach's tail is funny (in my manip I mean), and most of his mane. I love the forelock and top of mane, but I couldn't get the rest to look like that.
Hehe, yes it's there, which is a plus for me. And the prints... I don't know, to me they just look too straight and perfect as far as the position of them is concerned. But I liked how they looked individually so I didn't want to redo them.
Aww, thanks! I was worried it might be too plain, which is why I added the heart in there.
Lmao! You're funny! You're on to me, I could have done it perfectly, I'm just that awesome, but I messed up some things on purpose just so you could critique it. Lol, j/k. And you're very welcome, I'm glad you like it.
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Sabriel-TS In reply to jcspenny [2010-12-09 18:17:10 +0000 UTC]
Crazy people don't! I mean I Run to You was even on pop channels!
hehe yeah I'm thinking you went all appy on my boys, poor things thoguh when we got him Doo had a fairly skimpy little tail... Now that i look at it... xD yeah the tail is a little poofy, but that's better than skimpy, Opie would be offended! I think the tail is funny cause there's no tail bone in it! it's much to flowwy which would be pretty, were it not an arabian that likes to stick his tail up when he runs xD Opie's looks fairly Arabianish with how it sticks out then flows down, mach's just flows which is why it's funny! And for the mane, maybe it's not enough shadows? so there's not enough depth? I dunno that's the only difference I see between the top and bottom of the mane.
haha i know that feeling. They just look so good but they aren't exactly right. straight and perfect its right. I think it's the concept of running, and that actual hoofprints in the sand froma running horse would look completely messed sense sand would be flying eveywhere, that screws us up. cause we want them to look perfect, but really they shouldn't.
I love the heart! perfect idea.
hehe i knew it! xD <3 you're the best
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Sabriel-TS In reply to jcspenny [2010-12-11 22:34:57 +0000 UTC]
hehe that's funny! and OMG! I hope it is too cause they are ssoooooo cute together and I love them!
gah i hate it when that happens, it's impossible to duplicate things when they look good. haha silly goose, you should have known about the tail bone before! thogh i guess I only really know cause I have and Arab so I can see it when he sticks his tail in the air. I'm gald to have helped you though. I should have pointed it out a lot sooner. haha I don't think he cares i brought him apples and treats, he's a mostly happy camper, except for the mud xD that could be it. I dunno, but it's possible.
nowno don't go hitting yourself over the head about it. at least you remembered the shadow, and your feet were out in the open, remember when you used to hide them behind whatever was there? I do, Somewhere Over the Rainbow I think was the piece xD
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Sabriel-TS In reply to jcspenny [2010-12-14 05:00:11 +0000 UTC]
YAY! and yeah Finn& Rachel would be alright, but, eh It just wouldn't be as exciting, I love Cory and Lea, but I don't like Rachel all that much.
HAHA! you're so very unobservant of tails! I love tails, especially Opie's cause it's so pretty xD haha yeah Opie and the snow, I think he wouldn't like taht one. He hates water remember and snow is frozen water, and colder! Arabians are made for the desert! xD
haha yeah but that's the one where I pointed it out, and then you got better with it! now Ipointed out the tail thing and now you;ll get better at those! I'm just so very helpful haha.
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jcspenny In reply to Sabriel-TS [2010-12-17 01:11:46 +0000 UTC]
Gah! Am I the only one who likes Rachel? She can be a bit of a snob, and she's getting worse, but I love her. She's hilarious, like in this scene:
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My baby teeth!
Speaking of not liking certain characters, I meant to tell you when we were talking about it on Facebook that I'm glad there's someone else out there who likes Jenna Ushkowitz/Tina! No one I talk to likes Tina, or Jenna's voice (except in the Dog Days are Over). She's not my favourite character, but I still love her. And the more often she's featured the more I like her.
Hey, I love tails too! I'm just ignorant to the technical details. Opie's tail (the one I didn't paint) is pretty. At least, I can tell that from pictures, it's probably even prettier in real life. Savvy has a pretty tail, too, when it's not full of burrs or ice balls. Hehe, Opie's spoiled weather wise. Sue has to brave the snow every year. I bet she wishes she could go live with you guys.
Yes, you are.
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Sabriel-TS In reply to jcspenny [2010-12-17 06:31:07 +0000 UTC]
haha probably. She's a great character for the show, but just has that unlikable air to her. It doesn't help that after every time she redeems herself and becomes good she turns around and does somethign bad. hehe I loved that scene, Jonathan's face, HAHA!
WHAT! how could tey no like her! she doesn't have the most traditional voice, but it's beautiful! She's a pretty awesome character too xD
haha the one you painted is fairly pretty xD haha Opies has all kinds of leaves in it at the moment I;ve brushed it out every day, but they keep coming back becasue he lays under the nasty shedding redwood-like tree. haha he doesn't thing so I think he'd rather live somewhere where it doesn't rain, porr thing he hates the rain. Sue could come live with us if she coudl handle the extremely long ride out here. xD
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Sabriel-TS In reply to jcspenny [2010-12-19 06:59:59 +0000 UTC]
mmmhmmm it would be the most awful thing ever in a person. hehe Jonathan, my cousin likes him too. my cousin called him the most gorgeous flamer she's ever seen, I think flamer ahd somethign to do with him being gay, i don't remember thoguh xD
YAY! hehe "....and Tina." that was the best. and I wish i could add Asian in front of everything and not sound racist!
ha. no these aren't normal leaves, they're like pine needles and leaves mixed together and they flake off like wheat and get everywhere! And I would eb totally fine with you comming with Sue. Our couch is really very comfy...
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Sabriel-TS In reply to jcspenny [2010-12-24 07:07:21 +0000 UTC]
No I disagree.Most gorgeous flamer yes, but most gorgeous any kind of persons must be blonde! Alex Pettyfer, and the brother, those are the most gorgeous any kinds of peoples.
HAHA! I loved that one! When they're in the office and she leans over to Mr. Shue, "I think he thinks Vampires are real." I'm glad she kept thinking that and used it against him xD
hehe yeah most likely, you'd have to bring some of the awesoem DVD series you have so we could watch them.
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Sabriel-TS In reply to jcspenny [2010-12-26 08:07:17 +0000 UTC]
fake looking bleach blondes are a no go, though the kid who plays Draco looks very good with the bleach blonde, thoguh I think his ins natural.
mmmm yummy I really like the first, pic, makes his eyes look uber gorgeous, second one he looks kinda like a cute little kid and the third, eh.\, bad pose I think or something. no Alex Pettyfer, but still good looking xD
YEAH! it was perfect<3
YAY!
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Sabriel-TS In reply to jcspenny [2010-12-31 06:50:15 +0000 UTC]
awww how'd you know I was going to ask? xD -nods- not bad, not bad, no the brother or Alex, but not bad. as to the second uhm, can we say Draco Malfoy wannabe? sorry kid that one don't work for you.
that looks liek someone Julia and Dawn would drool over. me, not so much. I don't really like the long straight hair, mmmmm. besides Ty should look awesomely hunky like he does on the book covers(#4). There he looks more, what would they call it... punk, rocker, emo -shrug- I don't know the terminology. But book guy, yeah he's hot.
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jcspenny In reply to Sabriel-TS [2010-12-31 22:09:40 +0000 UTC]
Hehe, I know you too well. And I know, it doesn't work for the second one! The first guy is a natural blonde, so it works. But the guy playing him now has very dark hair and they make him bleach it. It makes no sense, there's no reason Hanschen can't be a brunette, why not leave his hair the way it is?
I like the long straight hair look, so I like him like that. Not too long of hair, but that length, yes. Lol, you realize the guy on the book isn't real, right?
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Sabriel-TS In reply to jcspenny [2011-01-01 00:47:49 +0000 UTC]
YEAH! like the kid in Flipped(see note) is supposed to have dark hair and Blue eyes, but in the movie he has blonde hair and brown eyes(which I admit are not as captivating as blue, but still), I'm glad they didn't dye his hair and make him wear contacts. It's all in the director's interpretation anyway.
well then you and Julia can obsess over the guys with long stairght hair. -glares- Why do you have to go around crushing my dreams. I don;t care if you say he isn;t real, there is some guy out there taht looks just like that! probably not an actor, but he looks like that!
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Sabriel-TS In reply to jcspenny [2011-01-05 01:46:36 +0000 UTC]
True that! though it would be nice to have more blu eyed blondes in the movies....
right, sure ;] haha kinda yeah, but the cover kid is way more awesome xD
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