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Corneal Edema Tarot Project - Minor Arcana Card - Page of SwordsFeaturing Model -
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The landscape behind the model is beautiful, it's epic and tragic at the same time, delectable.
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I love this image,specially the position of her hands supporting the sword.
Congratulations!
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I am so glad to see you back doing some cards! 
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she waits patiently next to the river of tears...................for the return of the unholy creature who stole her happiness and dreams ............ to avenge the untimely death of her beloved..............
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Oh my goodness!!! This is fantastic! I missed them.. Really..
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The idea and composition are nice, but I'm finding the model looks foreshortened as if leaning forward (or as though her photographer were much taller than she and shooting downward); this gives it a really odd tilted feeling for me. Also had to do a double-take and stare at the cliff for a while, as at first glance it seems less like an elevated patch of ground than simply another bank of a small pool -- and that makes the birds seem out of place. I'm not as familiar with this card or suit, so i'm afraid some of the meaning and symbolism you may have been going for might be lost on me, but there's a lot of room to improve on this card.
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i'm gonna agree with MonTemplar, i think it's something about the shading at the edge of the cliff... maybe needs to be more sharp looking/darker...
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very nice image....the grund below her feet is interesting and so is the rest of the image 
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oh the new cards are beautiful!!!!> ..very awsome..i cant wait till their done so i can get my own deck
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There's something not quite right about the perspective of the scene, with the scale of the lady with her sword, and the clifftop she's standing on, on the left, compared to the river, the birds, and the tree on the right side. Makes it look like the lady is a giant! I suspect that this wasn't your intention.
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nice!, there is something estrange with perpesctive of the women that make her floating, but a like it, aetheral feeling
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Good job on the pose. Simple but the sword
makes up for it. The cliff at her boots looks
extremely weird though, shadow and all.
But the look of the cards are good. I still want
a deck desperatly. You'll let us know when it's
done right?
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I really like the compostition of this one, and the way she is holding the sword
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She's beautiful hon. As always amazing work. I love how you placed the sword, and the shadow was a perfect effect.
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I like it...
But there are a lot of details missing, it's a little uh... i mean, my eyes keep searching for the birds in the sky as well andthe model looks too short for the picture. Oh excuse me for my lake of english... i'm ill.
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I love your series of TAROT cards. How soon till we can get them!! lol.....
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Ooou, I like the composition of this piece. However, personally I would have preferred some colors (pale/unsaturated ones) in the picture, very good though.
Keep up the good work.
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