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Working on my lineart by copying some manga pages and trying to learn the process from there. Would love to hear suggestions, critique and/or tips to do better, what feels wrong and where should I focus more. It's not supposed to be 100% the same image, but in general the same person more or less. It took me also more time than I expected, but I hope it gets faster as one gets more practice. The lines are also a bit too messy I guess for now.

Description
Working on my lineart by copying some manga pages and trying to learn the process from there. Would love to hear suggestions, critique and/or tips to do better, what feels wrong and where should I focus more. It's not supposed to be 100% the same image, but in general the same person more or less. It took me also more time than I expected, but I hope it gets faster as one gets more practice. The lines are also a bit too messy I guess for now.