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TMNTony In reply to Fanaticguy1001 [2019-03-27 01:33:12 +0000 UTC]

I agree

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Fanaticguy1001 In reply to TMNTony [2019-03-27 01:41:36 +0000 UTC]

Also, I've been thinking of more dialogues for the Equestria Batgirls story that your working on. I hope I'm not being annoying with that, I'm just really interested in it. Would you like to hear it?

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jebens1 In reply to Fanaticguy1001 [2019-03-27 02:17:33 +0000 UTC]

I would like to see it

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Fanaticguy1001 In reply to jebens1 [2019-03-27 04:37:51 +0000 UTC]

Okay, so this one is basically when tensions begin to grow between the Bat Family and the Turtles and Rainbooms with Batman telling them that they need to get over their differences and do the job. They are at the Batcave.

Batman: You really have knack for messing things up don't you?

Leo: Hey, you have to be such a jerk about it. We did our best.

Batman: Your "best" isn't enough. You need to do better than your best.

Raph: Listen, pointy ears: In case may have forgotten, we have more experience with the Kraangs and Subprime than you and your little Bat Squad.

Batman: If that were true none of this would be happening right now.

Sci-Twi: And what about the Joker? Huh?

Casey: Yeah, things were bad enough when we only had to worry about the Kraang and finding a way home. Now we have to deal with a psycho clown.

Nightwing: It might have easier if you listened to us when we told you to be careful.

AJ: We might have been if you told us how dangerous he really is.

Robin: We did! What part of "extremely dangerous and proceed" was unclear to you?

Rainbow Dash: Maybe it was the part were you didn't mention he had acid squirting flowers, explosive teeth, very sharp cards and toxic gas.

Batgirl: At least he tried. [Looks to April] Which is something that can't be said for everyone.

Donnie: It's not April's fault if she gets a headache every time she tries to do big things.

April: And correct me if I'm wrong, but aren't you the one that looked like she was treating this like a game?

Batgirl: It's not my fault the Kraang are so dumb and it's fun to break them.

Black Canary: That I can understand. [Looks at Rarity, who was looking at her compass mirror (or filling her nails)] What I don't understand is what was all that with you and not trying to fight.

Rarity: You are joking, right? Do you have any ideas how hard it would've been to get these stains out of my outfit?

Huntress: Which begs the question: Why do you have outfits like these?

Rarity: [Gasp] I made these outfits. They really compliment each of our style.

Huntress: And that is useful to fight aliens how?

Rarity: [Sheepishly] It isn't. Nonetheless, when we are in action we look fabulous doing it [striking a pose]

Huntress: Oh, that has the be the most pathetic defence I ever heard. [Turns to Mikey and Pinkie] And you two, do you take anything seriously? Like anything
other than pizza or parties?

Mikey: Hey, you leave pizza out of this, crossbow girl.

Pinkie: Yeah, and parties are no picnic either.

Huntress: I give up. You two will never grow up. [turns to Fluttershy] And you, you spent most of the fight hiding.

Fluttershy: I just didn't want to get in the way.

Huntress: Oh my god.

Batman: So much for a team up.

Sunset: Only because you won't trust us.

Batman: Trust has to be earned. You're the one who kept the information of you being form Equestria a secret.

Leo: And you aren't? We're standing in your secret hideout, for crying out loud!

Nightwing: He's not the only one to have a secret hideout.

Raph: That's different.

Robin: Of course it is. Your hideout is in a sewer instead of a cave.

Raph: You better watch your beak twerp. Or I'm going to shut it clamp it.

Robin: A bird joke. How original.

Rainbow: I got your back Raph.

Casey: I swear, Grayson. You better back off.

Nightwing: Or what? You're going to wack me with your hockey stick?

AJ: If that won't do, I will.

Batgirl: You two have some serious issues.

April: And I know just how to work them out.

Black Canary: You really need to stop being so spoiled.

Rarity: My apologize I'm not as rough and tumble as you are.

Huntress: I can't believe you two are even alive let alone still on the team with all your goofing around.

Mikey: At least it's better than being someone whose such a hard-case.

Pinkie: Yeah!

Batman: ENOUGH! [Everyone shut's up] We don't like each other, fine, we all agree on that, but we need to stay focus on the task at hand.

Raph: I have an idea that could work: We go our separate ways and take care of our own business.

Batman: That is very bad idea.

AJ: How's so.

Batman: Because the last time that happened the League was captured and we had to fight in a colosseum against a group of villains that was lead by a talking telepathic gorilla.

Turtles and Rainbooms: [silent for a second] What?

Batman: Long story. Bottom line, splitting up is what got the League into that mess and it's happening again, only in a different way. We might be able to handle the Kraang and you could handle the Joker, but we don't have experience with the Kraang and you never fought the Joker. So, if we want to get the job done we'll have to get over our differences and work together whether we like it or not.

Both teams listen but are unsure of the plan.

Leo: He's right. Subprime and Joker are the real threat. We can't let our differences get the best of us. Let's just take some time alone and figure things out.

Everyone goes their different way. Only Batman, Leo and Sunset are left.

Sunset: That was close.

Batman: If the tension keeps growing, our chances of stopping Joker and Subprime are going to be close to none.

Leo: We have to find a way to make the work together.

Batman: Give me some time and I'll get back to you on it.

Batman goes on the computer while Leo and Sunset walk away.



Okay, so what do you think? I hope you like the reference I did about the Justice League episode. But if you think it would be better if the two team split up, then it's cool with me. Here's the dialogue:

Batman: It's clear this team isn't working the way we planned.

Raph: For once, I agree with Batman. I say that we get out of this stupid flying rat infested cave and find our own way home ourselves.

Leo: Fine by me. 

April: Same here.

Casey: We don't need these guys anyway.

Rainbow: Yeah, we're already awesome.

AJ: We fought Kraang before without them, we can do it again.

Mikey: And P.S. Your names are so lame by the way.

After the Turtles and Rainbooms left.

Huntress: Well, that's taken cared of.

Nightwing: Can't say I'll miss them.

Batgirl: We can't let them fight alone. Even if they fought the Kraang before, Joker is going to kill them.

Batman: I know, which is why we must stop them [Joker and Subprime] before they [Turtles and Rainbooms] do.

Which one do you prefer? Let me know.

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jebens1 In reply to Fanaticguy1001 [2019-03-27 13:07:34 +0000 UTC]

I like the first better. And I wonder what plan Batman has? And here's something I had planned, that when they all face the Joker, Raph and Applejack learn how dangerous he really is and both end up severely injured. And they have to sit out when the team has to face Penguin at the iceberg lounge.

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Fanaticguy1001 In reply to jebens1 [2019-03-27 17:22:34 +0000 UTC]

Genius. And for how AJ and Raph get hurt, I'm thinking that they get exposed to Joker gas and Batman administers the antidote. As for Batman's plan, I'm pretty sure it's going to be a well thought out plan that shows just how much of a strategist he is.

For the aftermath of AJ and Raph after they wake up I was thinking that before they faced Joker they acted like real jerks to Batman, with Raph most likely saying something about his parents while AJ saying that he's just as bad as the ones he fights and he's the one bringing them out. Then after they get exposed to Joker gas and they start laughing to death, much to the Turtle's and Rainbooms' horror.

Pinkie: Why are they laughing like that?

Robin: They aren't laughing. They're dying.

Sci-Twi: What?

Nightwing: It's a side effect of Joker toxin. You die laughing with a grin on your face.

Leo: Is there a cure?

Batman: Yes, I have it. [Gives the cure to AJ and Raph. They start slowing on the laughing and then pass out]


[Later at the cave]

Raph: Urgh, my head.

AJ: I feel like I've been run over by a herd of runaway cows.

Mikey and Pinkie: Raph/Applejack! [Mikey hugs raph while Pinkie hugged AJ]

Rarity: Thank goodness you two are alright.

Raph: What happened? [touches his cheekd] And why do my cheeks hurt so much?

Sci-Twi: Joker infected you with a toxin that caused you to laugh to death.

April: You almost died. Batman gave you the antidote in time.

[Raph and AJ looked at Batman who was at the Batcomputer]

Batman: I think I might have a way to find Joker and Subprime. Oswald Cobblepot.

Nightwing: Aka the Penguin. A major guy in the criminal underworld.

Raph: Alright, let's go [Tries to get up but can't]

Batman: We are going to take care of Penguin. You two stay here and rest. The antidote is still working on that toxin.



What do you think?

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jebens1 In reply to Fanaticguy1001 [2019-03-27 22:08:08 +0000 UTC]

Good, it'll be very useful.

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Fanaticguy1001 In reply to jebens1 [2019-03-27 22:30:12 +0000 UTC]

No problem. If you need any help, just let me know.

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TMNTony In reply to jebens1 [2019-03-27 02:59:12 +0000 UTC]

Me too.! Wouldn’t hurt to have some more. I think we have enough for two to three chapters? Well anyway sock it to us

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