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JediAnnSolo β AGENCY Prologue pg8
Published: 2008-09-01 16:49:28 +0000 UTC; Views: 15668; Favourites: 75; Downloads: 15
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Happy Labor Day, guys! I caught a little break and decided to post page 8. This page hits DrunkDuck on September 28. I'm trying to stay 4+ weeks ahead of schedule and since I'm getting more feedback in here than there, I'd like to see what you think of it.
Yes, I'm aware I have commited one of the seven deadly artist sins: the copypaste panel. Don't judge me-- I personally liked how it turned out.
I am merely responsible for the art and story. All characters are copyrighted to their respective owners.
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So are the pictures what really happened then what the text is saying?
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Ooo, ominous. A bit of trouble on the Homefront.
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He's probably teaching his son to do the barrel roll.
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krystal looks different 
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She lives in the city. What amazes me, is how she became from a native girl from her planet, to a mercenary space pilot in McCloud's team.
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You say you copy-pasted, but you added that sweet twinkling tears in the second one, so I would say you did fine...also, after reading ahead and seeing how much time a few copy-paste panels could give you, I think it would be justifiable.
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Well, I appreciate that.
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Krystal generally doesn't wear clothes.
And she seems to bear curious tribal symbols.
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So her two-piece princess garb, three different cat/flight suits she wears (one of them being from her bad ending) and the pink sweater she has in the good ending where sheβs Marcus' mother arenβt clothes? And she hides her tribal symbols in AGENCY.
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omg my bbf's second name is McCloud!
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Hmmm...
Fox and Krystal having marriage problems it seems.
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Awww... I like that last panel, with the glistening tears.
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Fox and Krystal look like they're arguing in the first panel. Is something going on?
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ooooooohhhhhhhhhhhhhh....ME WANNA READ MORE!!
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Great job, and I love the last panel. It's very moving.
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so far, this is getting more and more interesting 
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