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jefchangcomix — into the darkness
Published: 2006-07-26 08:04:53 +0000 UTC; Views: 2666; Favourites: 24; Downloads: 138
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page 2...hahahahi spend too much time on these.
at this rate, issue 0 will be done like...next year.
Ling and Kyma belong to mee. tee hee heee
EDIT:
made some panels wider so that the borders didn't take up so much space.
dealt with some anatomical inconsistencies
added some stuff to the first panel
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Comments: 13
I want your shading skills. D:
I like how your characters pause every so often. Very nicely paced.
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the artist from the webcomic "gone with the blastwave" also does take a long time to post up something...
and i really love his work!
i guess you can also take your time, since yours is also going really well!
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This is really, really pretty. Your coloring and stuff... the expressions and all are just gorgeous. And I like the way it looks different than the standard comics... which is what most of us would do. Looks like you take a lot of time in these.
My biggest suggestion would really be on your dialogue. I handletter... not on the computer with a tablet, but with an ink pen... and trying to switch that into computer perspective... try to line them up a bit more. You would probably want a bit more space between your text and the borders of the panels. And you should probably try all-caps instead. Just... the first panel. "It'll be fun". Fun cuts way too close to the edge of the border. Don't be afraid to make the bubbles a bit larger... or even text smaller... the way you do your text can really set the mood.
And remember that you're not writing. You're drawing each letter.
I hope that helps a bit. Of course, your handwriting is pretty legable, just the all-caps makes things way more readable.
I love the way you keep things with the single tone. You really can set a mood in the art. Do keep it up. 
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Well, if You find time, a little question ...?
how much is "too much time" - - -
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dude, i'm really looking forward to more of this comic. I really enjoy the style that you use, since you don't see painting style used too often in comics. this looks like you've got a nice eye for pacing, so far, and the drawings look very nice. i also love how you hand-write all the dialouge. it looks very professional, and i hope you continue working on it!
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actually i fucked up on the hand placement on the third panel....nvm
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TO FIX/DO LIST (AKA stuff I just noticed I fucked up on)
Background details - ruins or something? (first panel)
Hand misplacement (second panel)
add mountain (fourth panel)
Kyma's left shoulder/arm (fifth panel)
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I don't think it matters if you finish and release these in short bursts. It actually helps build suspense.
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Just as mesmerizingly painty and atmospheric as the first... mmyess.
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