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Published: 2014-01-20 07:20:40 +0000 UTC; Views: 268; Favourites: 6; Downloads: 1
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Description Too soon a statistic, dead on the streets
with only their blood ebbing toward their failed dreams
Dreams used to escape reality
Dreams too high for even angels to reach

Evil personified...
since birth, being told lies
how can you blame them
havin' red and blue throwin' up signs
those are their only idols and heroes

speakin' like those
who have forfeited there souls
heading down roads of destruction

Society's hands so stained with the crimson liquid of life
but remember we are society.
let us not hide our blood stained hands
but instead work towards the future
a future where our children's hands are clean
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GhostOfTheEmptyGrave [2014-01-21 00:22:37 +0000 UTC]

Maybe someday kids will have better people to look up to...

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JeffCross In reply to GhostOfTheEmptyGrave [2014-01-21 02:52:00 +0000 UTC]

I believe there are good role-models out there they just need to step up and take the role.

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GhostOfTheEmptyGrave In reply to JeffCross [2014-01-21 21:25:59 +0000 UTC]

Maybe they're just outnumbered by the bad role-models...

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JeffCross In reply to GhostOfTheEmptyGrave [2014-01-24 02:36:50 +0000 UTC]

they so are...

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GhostOfTheEmptyGrave In reply to JeffCross [2014-01-24 23:42:48 +0000 UTC]

Sadly...

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Edges-to-Everything [2014-01-20 23:41:14 +0000 UTC]

Although I live in Minnesota I read the L.A. Times every day (L.A. Now, actually) because as a truck driver I was in L.A. often, before April '92 and after. The city has never really let me go since. I've walked the streets downtown, been in the old bus station (in '85), spent a night at the Hotel Cecil. Your poem, and your anecdote about the kids on the bus - that's so L.A. to me, sadly. There's a lot more to the city of course, but you voice the lost dreams of the lost angels very well.

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JeffCross In reply to Edges-to-Everything [2014-01-21 02:48:46 +0000 UTC]

I'm new to LA this happened in the Bay Area, but no matter where we are I think this rings true... racist rednecks, KKK, drunks, druggies, wife beaters... the list goes on, none of these people should be seen as a role-model but far too often too many are...

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Edges-to-Everything In reply to JeffCross [2014-01-21 03:11:18 +0000 UTC]

Oh, okay. I've been around the Bay Area too, mostly San Jose and up the east side to Vallejo and beyond. Sadly yes, it happens everywhere, all around the world. Children suffer the most, losing their innocence young - if they ever had the chance to be innocent to begin with.

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JeffCross In reply to Edges-to-Everything [2014-01-24 04:32:58 +0000 UTC]

I personally think we are taught to be evil... that doesn't mean we can't be evil on our own... it is in us all... or at least that is my beliefΒ 

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Edges-to-Everything In reply to JeffCross [2014-01-24 05:31:06 +0000 UTC]

That's my belief too...

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chainedheart977 [2014-01-20 20:31:46 +0000 UTC]

mmhm. Very sad, this world has so mant great things but all theΒ bad comes to the fore front. Wish it was different, but utopia is impossible, even so it's up to ppl like us to do our best to make the world a better place.

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JeffCross In reply to chainedheart977 [2014-01-21 02:41:15 +0000 UTC]

true it is up to us... we can only make our surroundings better but if everyone does their part it won't be for not...

Β there are great things and/or people in this world... so we, as people need to make our little part of our world more bearable for us, those we love and future generations...

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chainedheart977 In reply to JeffCross [2014-01-21 03:18:38 +0000 UTC]

Spot On (Of Course I'm listening To My Imortal by Evenessance while reading this)

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JeffCross In reply to chainedheart977 [2014-01-24 04:34:27 +0000 UTC]

LOL I like Evenessance they have such a haunting sound

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chainedheart977 In reply to JeffCross [2014-01-24 04:41:20 +0000 UTC]

Ikr, they're AWSOME! (I swear it really is my fav band that has a female singer)

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cebinc [2014-01-20 18:46:08 +0000 UTC]

Yes, I'm the one who downloaded it

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JeffCross In reply to cebinc [2014-01-21 02:30:15 +0000 UTC]

cool XD

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cebinc In reply to JeffCross [2014-01-21 02:34:16 +0000 UTC]

Β  Β  Β  Β 

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iceteakik [2014-01-20 10:42:29 +0000 UTC]

I liked this, its so true.

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JeffCross In reply to iceteakik [2014-01-21 02:29:54 +0000 UTC]

thank you... and yes it is too true and its getting worse as time goes by...

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