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jelenasseid β way i dont like magic
Published: 2011-04-16 07:20:23 +0000 UTC; Views: 347; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 0
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an other work for a contest on the[link]
In the S.o.T univers existing a lot of LoonaΒ΄s thy sometimes look different but the share some fackts:
- thy have wings
-thy can doo magic (more or less)
- none of them know from wich realy they came
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Is this supposed to be purposely gramatically incorrect? Because it's hard to read and difficult to understand.
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sorry i cant do it batter on my own english is not my first linguare. my you can tell me how to do better
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Whatever you do, never use online translators. They translate word by word without considering the context.
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I never use one
but the writing Programs are not better
if i write, ther lay arond 2 diffrend dictionarys and a digital one
and ther is noone I can ask permanently to fix my stuff.
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I recommend finding someone who can proof read all your work beforehand. Try looking for someone who also speaks your language, perhaps a personal friend of yours who's good at English. If you can't find anyone near you, I actually don't mind having to edit some your work, just mind that I'm no professional, I do have a busy schedule, and that I live (probably) in a different time zone.
Other than that, there are some longterm, obvious things you should work for to improve your work: bettering English, using a dictionary, etc.
If you want my help, send a reply via note and I'll give some further details.
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Seconding this. It really distracts from the art.
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Nice idea!
Once again great art and a sad story!
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