Comments: 33
Saisuki [2010-02-02 02:31:58 +0000 UTC]
Overall
Vision
Originality
Technique
Impact
This is my first critique; therefore, I'm sorry if I seem too harsh.
The anatomy could use a bit of work, mainly the head. It seems kind of... I guess flat, for some reason. However, I must say I do love your coloring, and I don't think you should change it,m because it is beautiful, especially the highlights on the hair. I think you should try adding backgrounds now e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s… " width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Smile) - "/> They are bound to be just as beautiful e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b… " width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Big Grin) - "/>
I graded originality as lowest, I'm sorry, because a bunch of OCs lined up isn't most original thing (as if I should be talking XD), but as we're talking about a group of OCs, originality can't really go far, unfortunately. I think you did a great job!
*Saisuki
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Jempower In reply to Saisuki [2010-02-02 14:49:27 +0000 UTC]
Ahh yeah I know my heads can be a little flat sometimes. I couldn't think of any other poses at that moment along with the others(poses..are hard as hell for me XD) Soo that is why i stuck to the basics i have been trying to get out of my shell when it comes to the poses and thank you very much for the critique. I don't usually like it buuut i thought i might as well start getting them because well how else am i going to get better?
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Jempower In reply to mia1206 [2010-01-31 22:07:40 +0000 UTC]
Heh my friend Iwa chan requested Kei to be in it sooooo i did!
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XxSoratsuhiMitsukoxX [2010-01-27 02:37:44 +0000 UTC]
Lovely as always! Kei looks beautiful! ^3^
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chikadee34 [2010-01-27 00:45:44 +0000 UTC]
amazin as usual...out of curiosity, how do you get the background to "disappear" in a sense? Is that the type of file?
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Jempower In reply to chikadee34 [2010-01-27 01:19:32 +0000 UTC]
Ooh right well you take the background layer off and safe the file as a PNG
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XxBright-AuraxX [2010-01-26 04:45:47 +0000 UTC]
I love eet so much.
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Jempower In reply to Ashkorya [2010-01-26 18:23:46 +0000 UTC]
Glad you like it xD
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JLMagian [2010-01-25 23:06:52 +0000 UTC]
Muy fabuloso! ^^
They all look great! :3
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Jempower In reply to JLMagian [2010-01-25 23:09:17 +0000 UTC]
Heh thanks a lot m'deaaar!!
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argyledream [2010-01-25 22:16:04 +0000 UTC]
Good job! Thank chu so much for doing this!
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Jempower In reply to argyledream [2010-01-25 22:20:33 +0000 UTC]
No problem! i love ur oooccc she is amazing
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argyledream In reply to Jempower [2010-01-25 22:29:57 +0000 UTC]
Thanks! I've changed her look about 5 times =.= It wa not fun but I thin I've setteled on this look for her.
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Jempower In reply to argyledream [2010-01-25 22:32:37 +0000 UTC]
Oooh haha yeah well it's sometimes good for a change
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lynnuchiha [2010-01-25 22:08:00 +0000 UTC]
OMG I LOVE IT
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Jempower In reply to lynnuchiha [2010-01-25 22:12:57 +0000 UTC]
I'm glad you like it!
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Jempower In reply to Ruevelle [2010-01-25 19:49:22 +0000 UTC]
Hah thanks sis
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