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JenniferOHcious — Ravenclaw Girl
Published: 2008-06-24 06:15:04 +0000 UTC; Views: 1123; Favourites: 12; Downloads: 22
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I was hoping it would look better, however I don't have the patience right now to make it any better... I'll probably improve on this later. This is a potential "WIP."w00t. My first time making something like this.
If you read this, please tell me something you like about it and something that I should improve on. Thanks
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I like the shading and I think you did a great job coloring it. The blue on the chair really stands out really well against her uniform and complexion.
I think(for this one, at least) you need to put her house badge on her sweater; if this wasn't labeled "Ravenclaw Girl", I would have thought her to be just some random student.
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I didn't think of that. Thanks for the input.
I figured the color scheme of the chair gave it away, but then again I knew her house from the start.
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The composition is very nice and the bright colours are lovely! I love her pose and maybe you could integrate the wall behind her a bit!
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I love the girl's pose and her expression., and the whole picture makes a really delightful impression.
I'd like to see more definition in the chair-carving details, and the candles and their brackets seem to be floating in air.
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Thanks
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It's really nice. 
Could I use it for an ID if you don't mind? Because I can't draw or paint so well...But if it's problem it's ok.
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Sure, as long as you give me credit for it.
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I think it's very cute, but the only main problem that is see there is the lineart. The bg and the girl look as if they were from 2 separate worlds; you should make an outline for the bg, the candle and the chair. All in all, I love the colors you used ^^
(btw, have a look at the perspective of the floor 
Hope it was useful!
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Haha, yeah... That picture has epic problems
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But it has epic solutions! xD
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If I ever get around to it...
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This is a sweet drawing of a Ravenclaw girl reading a book or maybe even studying her owls.
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Yeah, we have to study
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Good composition and nice pose. The foreshorting of the arms and hands needs some improvement, like the hands need to be larger since they are the closer to us the the elbow.
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Thanks so much! Hands are my nemesis D:
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The best thing for getting body positions is looking at an actual figure in that position. Mimic makes perfect. Seeing how a leg looks when crossed like that will help improve how the one in your drawing will look, too.
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There's no problem with that. 
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I love the whole thing!
You did this digitally, right? What program did u use?
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Adobe Photoshop CS3 extended. Lines done in Adobe Illustrator CS3 'cause I hate Photoshop's pen tool.
The candle looks funny 'cause I'm left-handed and almost everything I does tilts
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do u have to buy that program?
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my mom bought me photoshop, and my ex-boyfriend, ~madfox43 got illustrator for Christmas and let me load it on my computer.
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I like the details on the chair's texture, but the dark outline clashes with it horribly.
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I love to be lazy. Someday I'll fix it.
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