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"Sonic!" Amy's yell for the one she loved echoed through the street of Knothole, to the one she yelled about."Here we go again…" Sonic said wearily, and then sped off away from Amy as she chased after him.
As obvious as it is, Amy was very interested in Sonic, bordering on being obsessed by him… Sonic himself however, wasn't interested in Amy, or in anyone for that matter.
"Won't you just stop Sonikku?! We're meant for one another, and you know it!"
"How many times do I have to tell you Amy Rose?! I'm not interested in you, or in anyone else! Can't you just accept that?!"
"No, because I know you don't mean it Sonikku!"
"Oh jeez…"
Meanwhile, in their path, Tails and Cream were talking to one another.
"What a dream!" Cream exclaimed. "But… what did she mean with that which you'd decided to do?"
"Um… to be honest, I'd rather not tell you about that." Tails replied secretly. "But I still think that it's helped me a lot, this dream… maybe life will be a little less dull and horrible now."
"Or maybe…" Cream put her arm around Tails' shoulder. "…it was always a good place, which you had just forgotten about at the moment."
"…Maybe you're right." Tails replied, and then he looked away to hide his blushing face. Incidentally, he also spotted something approaching. "What's that?"
The two friends barely managed to jump out of the way as Sonic sped past them in full speed. As Tails and Cream looked up from behind the bush they'd hidden in, they saw that Amy was in hot pursuit of Sonic.
"Hi guys!" Amy greeted Tails and Cream quickly, not stopping to run for even a split second.
Tails and Cream remained silent for a few seconds, before Tails broke the silence.
"…I don't know about horrible, but the world sure seems less dull all of a sudden."
"Why the heck is she chasing me like this?!" Sonic thought as he was running from Amy. "I've literally thrown all I can at her to make her stop, yet still she chases me!" Sonic saw a chance, and ascended to the roofs using a series of flag-poles sticking out from the houses. But this didn't stop Amy, as she just as easily as Sonic used the flags for the same purpose as he just did. "But for-!" Sonic started running again. "Someone or something please answer me, why is Amy Rose chasing me like this?!"
As the chase continued, the skies suddenly opened, letting out a heavy rainfall on the two runners, but except for the occasional slip on the wet underlay, neither of them were slowed by this either.
That is, until the thunder started coming down close to them.
"Hot damn!" Sonic swore as he narrowly avoided getting fried by one of the bolts of lightning. "Amy, this really isn't the best time to be man-hunting, can't we just call this off-?" Sonic's phrase was cut short as he made a fatal mistake, and was hit by one of the bolts of lightning. Not only did it burn through him from head to toe, it also caused him to fall from the rooftops.
"Oh dear Mother Gaia, Sonic!" Amy's yell was the last thing Sonic heard before losing consciousness…
"Wow, that storm came quickly…" Tails commented as he looked out through a window in Cream's home, into the heavy rain and thunder.
"Yeah… I'm sure glad we aren't out there." Cream said, shivering from the thought.
Tails gasped as he remembered something. "Sonic and Amy are still out there!"
"Don't worry about them, I'm sure they're just-. " Cream's phrase was interrupted by a sudden boom from downstairs as someone almost smashed the door open to get inside.
"Someone help me, please!" Tails and Cream both recognized the panicked voice, and ran down to investigate what was happing to Amy.
What they saw was shocking.
"Oh dear Mother Gaia…" Tails exclaimed in shock.
"Sonic… what's happened to him?" Cream asked out of scare.
"H-he was struck by lightning and fell down the roof and- oh my God help him someone!" Amy was so panicky that she couldn't even speak properly.
"Put him in the couch, I'll get some first aid!" Tails told Amy, and then ran into the kitchen, where he knew Cream and her mother had their first aid box.
Amy went into the living room again to check on Sonic.
"…How is he?"
Tails was the one monitoring Sonic, seeing as he had the best medical knowledge of all the friends. "…He's not grown worse, but he's not showing any sign of improvement either." Tails told Amy, and then he looked down at Sonic's unconscious face. "…I know he won't like it, but we might to get him to a hospital."
"In that condition, he wouldn't even make it out through the door before he would crash." Amy and Tails both looked up from Sonic as Vanilla, Cream's mother and a trained nurse, walked into the room. "Besides, they wouldn't be able to do much better than Tails can here in my home." She smiled at Tails. "For one so young, you are very skilled in many trades Tails."
"…Thanks Ms. Rabbit." Tails smiled back at Vanilla as he thanked her.
"Don't thank me Tails, just make sure Sonic will get the best care possible." Vanilla told Tails gently.
"Yes Vanilla!" Tails replied enthusiastically, and then he went back to monitoring Sonic.
"As for you, young missis Rose, you should be waiting outside and let Mr. Prower do his work." Vanilla told Amy, and took her with herself out of the room. Amy followed willingly, but she couldn't help looking back at Sonic one last time as she went out of the room…
Three days later…
"Urgh…" Sonic groans as he sits up after he wakes up with a mighty headache. "What the heck happened…?"
Just then, Tails came back into the room, eating on an apple. He almost choked on the bite when he saw Sonic conscious and sitting in the couch.
"Hey guys, he's awake!" Tails yelled into the room he came in from and then he ran up to Sonic. "How do you feel Sonic?"
"…Uh, except for a mighty headache, I don't feel too shabby." Sonic answered as some of his friends, including Amy, Cream, Vanilla, and the three-man group Chaotix, came into the room.
"Well that's great t'hear pal!" Vector the Crocodile, the self pronounced leader of the Chaotix, said and stepped forward. "We were all worried about ya y'old hog!"
"Is he okay? Is he okay? Is he okay?" The question was like repeated from a machine as the youngest member of the Chaotix, Charmy the Bee, flew over Sonic's face.
"He'll be okay if you get outta his face!" Vector told Charmy, and then he roughly removed him from over Sonic's face.
"…The same madness as ever it seems." Sonic commented as he saw Vector and Charmy have a catfight with one another, with Cream, Vanilla and Espio the Chameleon, the third member of the Chaotix, trying to step in between them.
"Oh you've only been out three days bro; the world won't change that quickly." Tails joked.
"Heh, I suppose you're right." Sonic agreed with a laugh. "But no one's told me what happened yet."
"Oh, right…" Tails looked behind himself before continuing. "Then let's get someone who can tell you in detail."
Amy slowly stepped forward to Sonic and looked down on him with worry apparent on her face. "…Are you alright Sonic?" She asked him after some doubt.
"…Yeah, I'm quite good." Sonic said, this scene being a fine contrast to what was happening in the other end of the room. "You know what happened?"
"Well, basically… you were struck by lightning… and then you feel down a roof." Amy told Sonic, and then turned away from him.
"…Is there something you're not telling me?" Sonic asked Amy, confused over her sadness.
Amy was on brink of tears as she turned back to Sonic and yelled out the answer. "I was chasing you in that thunderstorm! It's my fault, my fault that you got hurt!" Amy's yelling made the fighting between Vector and Charmy stop, and made everyone turn back to Sonic and Amy. "I shouldn't have chased you, I should've let you go when it started to rain… I- I should've…" Amy collapsed on the floor, crying her eyes out in shame.
"A-Amy…" Sonic stammered in disbelief… He knew he had to say something to make Amy feel better, but he didn't know what… Then, it struck him: The perfect idea. "…It wasn't your fault." Sonic started, and put his hand on Amy's shoulder. "It was my fault." Amy looked up in surprise, her tears still rolling from her eyes. "I've only got myself to blame for my injuries… Why did I run from you like that anyway? Why have I been running from you all these years?"
Tails made a weird face as Sonic said this. "…Exactly how badly was he struck?" He quietly asked Cream, who nudged him for his mean comment.
"…W-what are you saying?" Amy asked, just as shocked to hear this as she was sad for hurting Sonic.
"I'm saying that I've been childish, an idiot, running from you like this all these years." Vector raised an eyebrow at Sonic's speech. "What was I thinking? I wanted to be free like the wind, so I could experience the world fully, and I saw engagement and marriage as an obstacle to that…" Sonic shook his head and sighed. "But now I realize… with how you must've carried me through rain and thunder to get me to safety… just what a relation like that can give you. Engagement isn't a hindrance… it's an experience, a whole new world to explore!"
"…Am I dreaming?" Amy couldn't believe what she was hearing Sonic say! The hedgehog she'd chased since childhood, the one who'd accepted friendship but never love from her, the one who'd gotten hurt and risked his life at several occasions to save her, the one she cared for the most in the universe… was he confessing his feelings towards her?
"Amy… this event has convinced and taught me… If you truly feel that strongly for me…" Sonic lifted Amy up so she was standing, while getting up himself. "…then who am I to neglect your love?"
"S-Sonic…?"
"Amy Rose… your feelings are answered… I love you." Sonic's speech was finished, but he was not. "And to prove that I love you, I have something for you… for not letting go of me, and for saving my life."
Everyone in the room was silent, as Sonic leaned closer towards Amy, both of their faces blushing in a bright red color from all the emotion they felt… They were millimeters away from one another, as they both closed their eyes, and then they met lips in a passionate kiss right on the lips.
The sensation was completely new to both the hedgehogs, as the warmth of their breaths and their skin touching overwhelmed them. Amy was clinging to Sonic's strong body so she wouldn't fall over from the feeling, while Sonic tried to keep himself from shaking like a leaf in the wind… The wind, it was blown right out of them, and instead a tornado of heat flowed over them.
And the passion they felt seemed to literally flow out into their surroundings, as Tails, Cream, Vanilla, Charmy, Vector and even Espio, who had a reputation for being a bit cold, blushed as well, and felt the need to take the hand of the one closest to them.
The moment only lasted for half a minute, but it felt like it had been so much longer to Sonic and Amy as their lips separated once again. They looked upon one another, the tears of joy in their eyes like small sparkling diamonds… they didn't want the moment to end just yet.
As Charmy realized he was watching two young creatures making out with one another, he suddenly grew disgusted. "Eww! Kissing, kissing!" He yelled and flew over to Sonic and Amy. "Sonic and Amy, you're not sitting in a tree!"
"That's it you whippersnapper! You're getting a spanking!" Vector roared and tried to catch Charmy as he flew away, sticking out his tongue at Vector.
But even with the ruckus Vector and Charmy caused once again, Sonic and Amy seemed like lost in another world… and who's to say they're not, Amy having never kissed anyone before because of her affection to Sonic, and Sonic for his phobia of relationships.
All good things do come for a stop though… and Sonic and Amy's kiss was separated for the last time that day. But these events were the start of an entirely new Mobius, one in which life as these friends know it, would never be the same again…
What is waiting in the future of these two? That, I cannot tell… But what I can tell, is that their lives were forever, much better…
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Comments: 59
once again
thumps up on the whole Sonamy situation
unfortunatly i cant say the same for Tails and creamj, /: srry
still an awesome storry, same with the series (if it was)
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Just a random series, loosely hanging together, if at all.
Yes, this is one of my better pieces from this time around. I really was just chunking out cheap short stories at this point though. Still, glad you like it.
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well, like i always say
no, thank you for taking the time to both make the time to make the stories and to post them
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yo jerkera. i have a knuckles and tikal fan fic for you to check out. it has a thunderstorm in it too. its where knuckles and tikal become a permenate
couple on angel island. you may find it interesting to read. it took me 2 whole days to write it. its kinda mushy sounding at the end. not as mushy as some sonic fanfics ive read on deviant art. but i hope you like it.
come to my page and check it out
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Interesting approach. Trying to catch an unknown author into your comment net are we?
Well, I suppose I might take a look, if just for show.
And thanks for the comment. Excuse my crappy storywriting back here.
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hey man don't worry about it. your story writing is very inspirational. it rocks man. i know you will enjoy mine. its kinda mushy sounding at the end. but, ya can't blame a guy for tryin to write a sonic romance fanfic.
it wasn't bad for my first try. truth be told, im not much of a typer. but, i did my best.
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Well, I can't blame your storywriting. Pretty cheesy, but hey, it's hard not to do that when you're writing love-stories.
But I'm having a hard time reading something that's written completely in CAPS LOCK. I could honestly not even finish reading it, it got so annoying. 
You might also want to use less paragraphs.
Because right now,
you're writing something like this
And it get really hard to read it like this.
It would be better if you wrote a bit more... Well, check out any normal story book, and you'll see what I mean.
Maybe something like this:
"I knew that love was fragile, I knew that it was brittle, yet I went down on its path. Why? Well... maybe because I'm a fool, maybe because I was longing for its embrace... or maybe, just maybe, because I felt it in its truest, most raw form, and just couldn't turn away. I mean... if one can turn down such strong emotions, one must be a psychopath, or simply insane. And as for me, I wouldn't like to be called either.
And that's why I cannot, and will not, turn away from love..."
...Usually I would add some form of joke to the end, but since it's just an example, well...
Still, love isn't really something I write much about. I write more about angst and such. Look for Prejudice if you want to see my current style. I can assure you that it's a million times better than this too.
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yeah well it may sound cheesy but, ive had the story in my head for 3 years now. i know i capitalized the whole story, but im not much of a typer. i understand the example of romance you just gave me, it helps a little. but remember this is the first story i ever wrote. so dont blame me for writing somthing cheesy, mushy, or plain weird.
i seen guys on deviant art write more cheesy stuff than i ever wrote. its very rediculous. my story is just a rookie thing i started out with. truth be told i won't write anything this mushy again. im thinking of a new story that has my favorite rock band KISS. in it. the story has KISS not only as a rock band, but they have super powers. in they are in tokyo japan, its an anime story. i will write it soon. it will make much more sense.
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Uh-oh, sounds like you have a plan there.
We'll just have to see. But remember, try to write properly for the readers. A good writer doesn't just write a story, they write a story that others want to read. You've got talent, I can tell, but you need to work on a few things to refine yourself.
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i can see what ya mean. in fact, im right in the middle of writing my new story. it might take me more than 2 days to write it. im trying hard to get it right. it might be a little better than the first one, and funnier.
i hope ya like KISS. cause in this story it has the rock band KISS, and one of my favorite animes, AH! MY BUDDHA. I bet you can think of how that will turn out
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If you consider two days as a long time to write an entire story, you need to slow down, or make longer stories. Sure, it takes me months to get anywhere, especially when I have an artblock, but really...
Oh I like KISS, but I'm more into Metallica, Sabaton and Iron Maiden to be honest. And as for anime... well, unless it's got explicit nakedness in it, I won't know about it.
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well to be honest with you, #1 KISS, AC/DC, MOTLEY CRUE, TWISTED SISTER, ALICE COOPER, DIO, AEROSMITH,
OZZY, AND LED ZEPPELIN, ARE MY TOP FAVORITE ROCK BANDS.
there might be a little nudity in my story, cause you just gave me an idea 
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You're into the classic bands I can see. Pondus would be proud. 
Oh my, dirty stuff. You just caught my attention.
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yeah. im proud of the music i listen to.
i just hate these new bands like, lady GAGA,
and well... i can't think of anyone else. i hate techno music, cause im a rocker. thru and thru.
oh yeah, if you have seen the anime, ah! my buddha,
there is one female charracter i can't stand, its yuuko atoda, the blue haired tomboy chick, that always beats up on ikko, and humiliates the hell outta the poor bastard. you see my new story is gonna have the charracters from ah my buddha and all 4 KISS members in it. what till ya hear what ace frehley of KISS does to yuuko after she hits ikko. you will laugh your ass off!
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You've got good taste. I remember the first time I listened to techno... I think that I fell into a trance, quite literally, and woke up having wet myself. 
I've not seen it.
But hey, I want to see this that you're writing.
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im just about done with it.
just a few more days of writing and it will be finished!!!
patiance young grass smoker. remember patiance LOL!
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Heh, looking forward to hearing this one.
And don't you dare call me a grass-smoker!
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dude! i was kidding when i said THAT GRASS SMOKING JOKE.
JESUS H CHRIST DUDE DON'T FUCKING TAKE THINGS LITERALLY. IT WAS A LINE FROM THE JACK BLACK MOVIE,
TENACIOUS D IN THE PICK OF DESTINY.
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I wasn't. Don't take me seriously either. 
Still, I haven't seen Pick of Destiny. Though I really would like to.
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its alrite dude. i hate ciggies my self.
but about the pick of destiny. you really have to freakin see it.
it was made in 2006. it stars jack black.(aka JB aka jables) and his life long friend kyle gass(aka KG aka KAGE) good movie. i have it on dvd.
truth be told. tenacious d has been around since the mid 90's. so they kick ass.
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"It doesn't matter if it is good... It only matters if it rocks! The main thing that we do is to rock your socks off."
But hey, I know some better lyrics than that one up there...
"You don't always have to **** her hard. In fact, sometimes, that's not right to do... Sometimes you got to make some love, and ****ing give her smooches too."
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it does rock, as a matter of fact.
and that song you just mentioned is called F***
her gently. i have it on my ipod.
here's another one for ya.
CAN'T YOU SEE HE'S THE MAN LET ME HEAR YOU APPLAUD.
HE IS MORE THAN A MAN HE'S A SHINEY GOLDEN GOD!
CLASSICO! ^^
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I know what they're called.
I like those songs not only because they're great, but also because of the humor.
"If you think it's time to f***ing rock, and f***ing roll, out of control, well then you know have to rock a block, you f***ing sock, well f*** a c***!"
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IM glad ya know them.
he is going to kick your fucking ass.
and you know, his name is kyle gass.
rocking and fucking rolling and fucking rocking and fucking rolling.
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I'm not even gonna try to copy whatever sounds he made after that part!
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i know that dude HA HA!
i can't type that either. hahahahA!
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Well, anyway, I added you to my watch list. I'll know when you submit that story the moment you do.
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thanks dude. just a few more days.
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I think that was awesome and that u should make some more because that was really good and i mean good I loved it
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Bah, Sonamy, who needs that when you got Taismo?
I just wish I'd get some more critique one of these days...
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awww, that's sweet! Nice work describing the emotions.
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Thanks a lot. It's always great to hear a nice review.
I would appriciate some independant critcism though. But what the heck!
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I like critiquing! I just don't always do it if the artist hasn't asked for it. I could write you a review, should I do so for this story, or is there something else you want some helpful critique for?
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Well, anything you can tell me is another piece of knowledge. Feel free to tell me anything about anything.
And btw, I know already that some of my erlier stories, as well as Mobian Apocalypse, have a lot of flaws. Misspellings, lack of drama and emotion, some pieces which simply doesn't fit together. So don't bother critizising those... if you were to read them, that is.
All I ever do is to ask for attention, not to try and grab attention through force or something... well, some simply ridicolous action. Just to have that sorted out.
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but I want to shoot you!!! xD just joking~
anyway, yu wrote this story very well!!! 
and I noticed that it was a little continue with that taismo story "dream" that you wrote not to long ago!
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I had a feeling you would say that Essy Messy.
Yeah, maybe a tad too fast for me too... but hey, it's Sonic we're talking about, he's too fast in everything he does!
...Which makes me wonder just what he's like in bed.
Yep, Chaotix messes up things as usual!
Yeah, I wondered if anyone was going to notice that part. Seems someone did.
I wonder if I can do something like that again... like an indirect continuation (or sequel at least) to another story?
It does sound like an idea.
But all in all, thanks a lot girl!
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Ofc I say it xD
yeah, it was actually a little to fast I may say xD due for me thinking sonic is in reality a little bit more shy confeessing his TRUE feelings and such 
ofc!! xD
I always notice those kind of things hoho x3
yeah, sounds like a great idea!!
you are sooo welcome!!
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Yeah, but once the cat's outta the bag, there's no stopping it.
That you do... but you seem to be the only one.
That's what I thought too.
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yeah xD
yea, to bad xD
yay~ x3
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wow *singing* sonic and amy sitting in a tree K-i-s-si-n-g .awsome story I'm a sonamy fan
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Well, that last part's obvious.
Thanks anyway Twist!
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I'm not a sonamy fan but I like it anyway 
Anyway, great job Jerkera-kun!
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dont..like....sonamy........
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That's what I like hearing Erika-chan, how someone who's not a fan of the coulpes/characters still like my stories.
And as for Taismo... perhaps if I get my mind to the more happy side of it.
Thanks a whole load Erika!
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You need a happy taismo story in your gallery
Np Jerkera-kun
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