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jess401 — A Horse's Tale 2

Published: 2008-07-11 21:34:37 +0000 UTC; Views: 1623; Favourites: 17; Downloads: 18
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Along their ride to reunite Aiyana with her family, Aiyana was having the time of her life. The soft cool breeze guided them to her tribe's location. It was as if they glided over the grassy hills without touching the ground. Grasping her mane young girl guided Morning Dove into the forest there. Aiyana understood what that this would be the last time the two would be together, Aiyana decided to make the best of their last time left. As night had fallen Aiyana watched her tribe, settle in their homes. The two slept peacefully as MorningDove lay to rest her body Aiyana cuddled close for warmth and began to sing a soft lullaby until she drifted into sleep. The mustang was very nurturing to the girl. The mustang stayed awake that night keeping Aiyana warm. Before MorningDove and Aiyana met, the mare had sadly given birth to a stillborn foal. She stayed days without eating and never leaving the little foal's side. Days went by; until the mare accepted the fact, the foal wasn't going to awaken. In a way, girl had become her responsibility and her child. Not long, the two friends watched as the sun golden glow rose about the sky, lighting up the forest pines, for a new day had come. MorningDove lowered her body bowing on her knees so the tired she could climb on. Aiyana climb had not eaten for 2 days, the girl's body protested onto the gray's back grasping the mare's long ebony mane, and slowly the two were off. Stopping by a lone nearby tree, a concerned look on Dove's face, wondering why they stopped. The weak child noticed the mustang's confusion, a tear slid down her small face. She would have to make this quick before her tribe would see the horse and try to capture its freedom. The mare lowered her neck over the girl's back. Aiyana came closer to the mare and as she did, the child whispered softly into the mare's ear, "I won't forget you my friend." Walking away from the she did not look back, Aiyana had missed her family; her family missed her as well.
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Comments: 8

Chiharuko [2011-09-13 03:19:44 +0000 UTC]

Hey, do you mind if I use this as a reference for something drawing? I plan on putting the finished product on dA so I was making sure was okay with you. I can send you a link of the finished thing and I can post a link to this. Just letting you know. x3

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icrystalline [2010-10-02 20:41:40 +0000 UTC]

So emotional!!! *crys* Both part 1 and 2!!!

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jess401 In reply to icrystalline [2010-10-05 00:39:03 +0000 UTC]

Aw. It's ok

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icrystalline In reply to jess401 [2010-10-05 14:55:34 +0000 UTC]

I know. Things like that make me want to cry. I'm that kind of person. XD EMOTIONAL!!!

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jess401 In reply to icrystalline [2010-11-17 04:53:23 +0000 UTC]

Wow. I still hope to continue their story but I have other projects I'm still working on

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icrystalline In reply to jess401 [2010-11-18 03:03:59 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, me too. I have to do a request, birthday present, some prizes for people on Youtube, and a couple of animations. XD I'm still alive. And also school projects. Right now we're doing our science fair things, and it is really hard. XP Competition is tough when they give a lot of money away for the winners. I heard the 3rd place winner gets at least $100. Or at least around that price, I can't remember. X3 *sighs* I'm glad the year is almost over. Next week is Thanksgiving break!! Yay!!

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J-Dove [2009-02-15 21:05:09 +0000 UTC]

wow you were right who stole my name really got your story.

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jess401 [2008-07-11 21:35:54 +0000 UTC]

ah crap some words are missing in the story.

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