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Published: 2009-04-17 20:53:19 +0000 UTC; Views: 988; Favourites: 31; Downloads: 0
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Model: AnnaHair and MakeUp: Alex
Photos and Post Processing: me
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Comments: 10
Firstly of all, you have chosen a really suitable model, with very suitable features to illustrate the mood that you want to bring about. Great choice of outfit to compliment the setting too.
For the framing, you have to chose to use a subtle yet classical approach to bring about the idea you have, with a toned down environment to compliment the subtle pastel colors of her clothings. Its a fab framing to project your vision.
however for the model's face, I thought it could be better choreographed, to properly bring out her best angle for the flattering effect, there's also a little too much 'neck room', making her neck look longer than it really is. you would also like to brighten up some shadows on her face and add in some details on her hair, which looks pretty muddled up.
Overall, I love how you projected your visions, just some minor tweaking and its all perfect. I really love her icy-cold gaze too, feels scary yet enticing e.deviantart.com/emoticons/g/gā¦ " width="17" height="15" alt="
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Thank you for the first critique I ever got since it's available on dA.
Yes, Anna really became a muse to me. I've got many ideas since the two shootings with her.
I also was worried about her neck, that the viewer can see so much of it. I really should study more poses to direct my model.
I love her face expressions, too. She really got the serious look.
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I think I might be the only one who is a little creeped out by how similar this looks to a corpse with a broken neck.
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love the expression of the eyes... amazing picture
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