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Published: 2006-06-08 22:55:03 +0000 UTC; Views: 37; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 2
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Description sweet child i'll always be there to hold your hand
and to help you stand
don't dwell on the past, it'll never change
dream a dream and never lose sight
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ellemennoP [2006-06-08 22:58:43 +0000 UTC]

aw, this is cute! one thing: "loose" should be "lose". But honestly, don't be afraid to put your poems up. you'd be surprised how much people will like them, and you get a lot of good constructive criticism.

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