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Published: 2007-12-21 14:04:48 +0000 UTC; Views: 264; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 12
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I'm going to sleepI have early morning dear
- claw me back to bed
Clutter late night noise
radio traffic sigh
- why toil on
fake breeze lovers kiss
you keep cool not warm tonight
- world shrinks in your embrace
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I thought haiku was 5-5-3 or 8-8-5 or I don't know what I'm talking about 
And umm, they have a meaning?
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True haiku has 5-7-5 and yes, there's a deep meaning in them all, i recall, however, i forgot it cause... I went to sleep right after writing them.
But it's normal for international Haiku to have like... no set number of syllables. 
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Ohhhh well. That was a gob full to intake. But, okay nonetheless.
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haha i don't get it either but
it's lovely to say out loud
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Noooo, they have a meaning... *glances around*
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haha EUREKA I FOUND THE SECRET MEANING!!
you should write more often
it's ridic
it's bril
its AMAZINGG!
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Mkay 
Cause, as I've said to others, I forget the meanings lol.
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I erm, dont get it :/
mebbe thats cos I dunno what Haiku is, but im sure Will would know..
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Lmao, it's a play on Japanese poetry.
And it forgoes the use of less important words, where possible (making them less important).
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and the purpose of that is? :/ me veryyyy confuzled, damn dogs again!
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It sounds really cool out loud and it forces the reader to think about the work.
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Ohhh okie, whatever ya say
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yea...something like that.
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