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JesusJohnnyandDanny In reply to nightviper16 [2008-03-28 15:49:15 +0000 UTC]

Yes please! I need critique so much. Thank you.

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nightviper16 In reply to JesusJohnnyandDanny [2008-03-28 17:06:27 +0000 UTC]

Mhm sure! Well I see a few things that make his face look iffy. First off, his face is kind of small, like short-small. Pair a small face shape with big face features and you basically have a little kid, so Danny looks a little too young here. His ear is a little low, and the point where his hair comes out (the point above his ear) is also a little too low. He has a lot of hair due to that.

And even though he is stylized, B.H's DP style does have fundamentals. He has a skull, though it's more oddly shaped than ours, since DP characters seem to have pointy skulls. *cindre 's "How I Draw Danny 1" ([link] ) does a fairly good job on showing how his hair lines up with his skull with pictures, because this is kinda hard to explain in words. (and my pride wants to shout, "No, I do not idolize her. She has lovely art, yes, but I am not part of her unofficial underground cult. And I learned by myself, not from this tutorial, but looking at this tutorial now, it is a good resource.")

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nightviper16 In reply to nightviper16 [2008-03-28 17:07:39 +0000 UTC]

uhm, so yeah. I think you just have to learn how to use DPSTYLE!Guidelines for DPSTYLE!Faces

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JesusJohnnyandDanny In reply to nightviper16 [2008-03-28 20:55:40 +0000 UTC]

Ok I'll work on it. Thank you!

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