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Jetera β€” Father by-nc-nd

Published: 2014-02-19 16:23:57 +0000 UTC; Views: 9378; Favourites: 560; Downloads: 72
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Description Here's the best version of that thing I called "my rhymes"//deleted. Now that's poetry! Written by wonderful TemporalTwins

We trust his tales
of far blue skies,
Where he's soared
and where we'll rise.

He's never failed
for us, his kin.
Come a fight,
he'd always win

In our hearts
he always stays.
Our father dear,
the dad we praise.
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Comments: 67

ArtsyColourfullpaws [2015-02-11 16:21:59 +0000 UTC]

;-; This is so touching and so sad.I love it ... *Warning this users feels have just busted into a gazillion peices*

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GIGAPOMP [2014-05-19 00:26:33 +0000 UTC]

I love this so much ;3;

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Jetera In reply to GIGAPOMP [2014-05-20 07:39:03 +0000 UTC]

Thank you

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TemporalTwins [2014-02-28 21:30:56 +0000 UTC]

So sad
I hope he makes it!
I'd hate for those cute little chicks to have to grow up by themselves....

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Mirror-Draco [2014-02-25 00:16:25 +0000 UTC]

aw

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DragonDollRAWR [2014-02-24 04:13:07 +0000 UTC]

Such beautiful work! But so sad... Β 

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FadingWraith [2014-02-22 23:41:36 +0000 UTC]

The feels... So beautiful. *sniff* Please let him be alright? Don't leave those chicks behind! *burst into tears*

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Zumoarikuta [2014-02-21 23:29:28 +0000 UTC]

This is amazing I love the color of his eyes their amazing.

This picture is so sad I just want to hug him and stitch his wounds.

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BurningAshDragon [2014-02-21 13:31:38 +0000 UTC]

No! DON'T DIIIIEEEEE!!!!! *Faints*

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a35744 [2014-02-21 04:46:31 +0000 UTC]

very great work! and how many times have you said thank you in the comments? lol


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Jetera In reply to a35744 [2014-02-23 11:58:36 +0000 UTC]

Thaaaaank youuuuuu Still not enough!

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WhiteElune [2014-02-20 22:44:09 +0000 UTC]

*snivvle*

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Jetera In reply to WhiteElune [2014-02-22 09:51:35 +0000 UTC]

Β 

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Cavehominem [2014-02-20 20:33:24 +0000 UTC]

Ohh touched my Heart! Thanks for this!

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Jetera In reply to Cavehominem [2014-02-21 16:20:52 +0000 UTC]

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Dark6Caskerd [2014-02-20 14:02:12 +0000 UTC]

nuuuuuu, don't die....

*sniff* beautiful... sad, but beautiful.

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Jetera In reply to Dark6Caskerd [2014-02-20 16:30:40 +0000 UTC]


and thank you Β 

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Dark6Caskerd In reply to Jetera [2014-02-20 18:27:54 +0000 UTC]

yw~

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GaarutoClyne [2014-02-20 04:51:49 +0000 UTC]

This work is really good at displaying a scene from what would be an amazing story.

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Jetera In reply to GaarutoClyne [2014-02-20 16:29:25 +0000 UTC]

Thank you

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gummiworm [2014-02-20 02:28:41 +0000 UTC]

that is so beautiful

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Jetera In reply to gummiworm [2014-02-20 16:29:08 +0000 UTC]

Thank you

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poolpelt-nightflower [2014-02-20 00:36:20 +0000 UTC]

This is ......Amazing......The kids are so cute. x3

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Jetera In reply to poolpelt-nightflower [2014-02-20 16:29:04 +0000 UTC]

Thank you

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KeLou [2014-02-20 00:31:47 +0000 UTC]

This is beautiful and so full of emotion.

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Jetera In reply to KeLou [2014-02-20 16:28:58 +0000 UTC]

Thank you

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Bradley-The-Blue-Fox [2014-02-20 00:26:12 +0000 UTC]

aww!!! D:

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Jetera In reply to Bradley-The-Blue-Fox [2014-02-20 16:28:51 +0000 UTC]

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Bradley-The-Blue-Fox In reply to Jetera [2014-02-20 22:14:12 +0000 UTC]

*huggles*

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RowantheFierce [2014-02-19 23:03:45 +0000 UTC]

So sad...so amazing...


your rhymes are good. at least, better than mine half of the time.

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Jetera In reply to RowantheFierce [2014-02-20 16:26:49 +0000 UTC]

Thank you ^^'

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RowantheFierce In reply to Jetera [2014-02-20 21:20:52 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome! ^^

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DizzyTigerX3 [2014-02-19 21:41:32 +0000 UTC]

I cant tell if he's holding berries or his own heart. I'm guessing he's bleeding though

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Jetera In reply to DizzyTigerX3 [2014-02-20 16:26:33 +0000 UTC]

He is

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DizzyTigerX3 In reply to Jetera [2014-02-20 22:06:29 +0000 UTC]

Well it's great none the less

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Annqueru [2014-02-19 21:20:16 +0000 UTC]

Lovely

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Jetera In reply to Annqueru [2014-02-20 16:23:49 +0000 UTC]

Thank you

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DemonMikoto [2014-02-19 20:24:10 +0000 UTC]

amazing work!Β 

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Jetera In reply to DemonMikoto [2014-02-20 16:23:45 +0000 UTC]

Thank you

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EnzoPut [2014-02-19 19:22:23 +0000 UTC]

This is fantastic and heartbreaking with real story and values. I really think it embodies an amazing story. Along the lines of the father fighting not to fail. Well done!

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Jetera In reply to EnzoPut [2014-02-20 16:23:36 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much

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AmericanWolf016 [2014-02-19 18:41:47 +0000 UTC]

Very nice work

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Jetera In reply to AmericanWolf016 [2014-02-19 19:21:46 +0000 UTC]

Thank you

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AmericanWolf016 In reply to Jetera [2014-02-19 21:12:52 +0000 UTC]

You are very welcome

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Tonythunder [2014-02-19 18:26:29 +0000 UTC]

This looks very beautifully dark,emotional and atmospheric all at the same time

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Jetera In reply to Tonythunder [2014-02-19 19:21:44 +0000 UTC]

Thank you

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Tonythunder In reply to Jetera [2014-02-19 19:28:46 +0000 UTC]

Y'welcome

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DuskRipper [2014-02-19 17:47:37 +0000 UTC]

ItΒ΄s a nice description

And the picture looks really great.

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Jetera In reply to DuskRipper [2014-02-19 19:21:39 +0000 UTC]

Thank you

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kuro-i-tami [2014-02-19 17:37:47 +0000 UTC]

it's amazing ! ;o; <3

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