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OctoberMoon1331 [2017-07-05 15:11:41 +0000 UTC]
I really like this piece, the water is well done! Tho, the blue lines in the boat doesn't fit to well. But, I think that your piece is very pretty anyway!
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JetMalek In reply to Coffeegranate [2017-07-01 16:00:35 +0000 UTC]
;v; This comment that you made means a **lot** to me, my friend. ...I was concerned about disappointing, with this piece-- after having done the tiny animation for the candle flame (previous piece).
This one disappointed *me* a little, at least: I really wanted to have *some* of the light move, or something! But I knew that I couldn't get it done by Friday, if I did that. I also don't know as much about a river water's motion, with such lighting on it, from my own observations. Certainly not as much as I do know from observing a candle flame in my home. It would be *tough* for me, animating parts of this piece... Yet, it almost begs to be done, with all of the splashing and running downriver!
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Coffeegranate In reply to JetMalek [2017-07-01 16:35:01 +0000 UTC]
Trust me, friend, you haven't disappointed AT ALL. I love this, animation or no. And hey, don't worry about stuff like that, it's not like you have a deadline. This IS art you do for you after all. Do what you want to do in the time you want to do it, being days, weeks, etc.
I don't know how much this helps but, usually if there's a thing I'm stuck on with an animation, I search YouTube for videos of how that thing works in motion and how other people animate it as a reference. Maybe if you did get round to it, watching something like this frame by frame could help?
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JetMalek In reply to LadyIcepaw [2017-07-01 15:53:34 +0000 UTC]
<"Also - Am I correct that this is your first attempt at a more painterly style, without lineart? ^^"
Ahhh, haha, you caught me in the act!! >D I consider you one of the experts on painterly styles, in all honesty. I'd love to find a pastel pallet like so many you've used before, and maybe... *try* painterly style again...?
So I drew the line art for this... and didn't want to 'touch' it, so to speak. Though I began coloring and thought I'd go over my lines (like normal), I decided to try only adding "lines" as highlights. (That got to be fun. Hahah! Especially with the foreground water!! )
Ultimately, I didn't remove the lines completely-- but instead increased that layer's opacity, blurred those lines... and even then, when they were 'too much' on the Human's face I erased some of them lightly. It might be possible to see some of the lines near the face, other than the chin? (Like the mouth.) For the most part, though, yeah: I *did* try without lines!
(I'm addicted to using contour lines. If you think of Chinese, Korean, and Japanese paintings on scrolls from hundreds of years ago, or "Ukyo-E" wood block paintings from Japan in the 1800s, or even 2D animation and manga from American Disney and Japanese studios in the 1900's: these are *all* inclusive of contour lines that I just adore. It's very hard for me not to incorporate them...! xD Don't know if I can successfully leave them out in the future, hahah! ...yet, maybe, I can improve with painterly style a little more with practice. Who knows?)
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MarcosVargas [2017-07-01 02:26:17 +0000 UTC]
Nice image tra la la
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