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clockwork-madness [2014-03-27 01:04:41 +0000 UTC]
Hi, I saw this in the critique journal for TraditionalUnleashed. I haven't ever played Diablo so I can't comment on how faithfully you've rendered the characters in terms of their likeness. However, I still think I can give you a little crit...
1) I think that there should perhaps be a bit of reflected light along the left edge of her neck. It doesn't need to extend the whole way up, but just enough to not make it look like her head is sitting on her neck in an unnatural manner. On the right side this isn't really a problem because you can see where the shape of the neck is turning into darkness, as opposed to the left where it looks like shadow just kinda swamped the area.
2) Is her armor made of metal or leather? It seems like it would be made of metal, but because there isn't really good contrast on the plates it reads more like leather than something shiny like metal plates. There is all sorts of reference to be found that you could extrapolate from I dig the dents and cuts left in it though, you're making the surface more interesting that way.
3) It looks as though her lips are outlined all the way around, even though given the way the light falls on her face this wouldn't be the case. Build the lips up with shading rather than filling in lines, it will help them look less flat, which is even more noticeable when the rest of her face is rendered more successfully.
Other than that, I think that the idea you have is really interesting, and I enjoy the brightness of her eyes. It's not overdone so that it's the only thing a person sees, which is great!! This is sometimes a hard effect to pull off right imo. A few tweaks and better shading and I think you could put this through the roof I hope this has been helpful to you.
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Nora-Ella [2014-03-24 01:29:12 +0000 UTC]
Wonderful!!
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JEURO85 In reply to Nora-Ella [2014-03-28 06:28:11 +0000 UTC]
mucho thank you.
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George-H-Art [2014-03-23 19:04:52 +0000 UTC]
Awesome!!
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MariniMartini [2014-03-23 11:57:56 +0000 UTC]
very beautiful, I love her look <3
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JEURO85 In reply to MariniMartini [2014-03-28 06:27:49 +0000 UTC]
Thank you very much. Im glad you like it
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laraali [2014-03-23 10:45:36 +0000 UTC]
awesome
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JEURO85 In reply to laraali [2014-03-28 06:27:34 +0000 UTC]
thankx
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isabel56 [2014-03-22 06:20:33 +0000 UTC]
Beautiful. I do agree that Digital art and traditional art should be in different categories .Digital art is beautiful I really dont know if the two can be classified as Traditional Art
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JEURO85 In reply to isabel56 [2014-03-28 06:27:27 +0000 UTC]
Thank you. I understand where the skill comes in but just the fact that any mistake can be undone at pretty much anytime makes it less...um risky and doesnt require the same level of planning or application. IMO its more proficiency with a program, but they do have great ideas and layouts.
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YochanArt [2014-03-21 22:05:29 +0000 UTC]
Amazing! Incredible well done!
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YochanArt In reply to JEURO85 [2014-03-28 18:55:24 +0000 UTC]
You're very welcome!
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Moonlight-Seraph [2014-03-21 17:04:35 +0000 UTC]
Wow, gorgeous! The shading is incredible, and I love that pop of color!
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