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Jewelia453 — Where do you go?
Published: 2006-03-28 10:12:42 +0000 UTC; Views: 100; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 12
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Description Where do you go?
When I can feel you here,
And yet your mind is elsewhere,
What secrets do you hide?
What words lay unspoken on your lips?
You’re so deep in thought sometimes,
That sometimes you cannot see,
That when your gone,
I’m by your side,
As I will always be,
But sometimes I get so alone,
Even when you’re so close,
Sometimes I feel you’re lost to me,
And will forever be,
Maybe some day I’ll understand,
Where it is your mind takes you,
Because wherever it is you seem to go,
I want to go there too.
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Comments: 9

chrixzy [2006-03-29 23:36:14 +0000 UTC]

tell!

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acmc [2006-03-29 09:05:19 +0000 UTC]

thats not reli sweet, its more sad and depresin that sweet, but it is romantic. love it

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Jewelia453 In reply to acmc [2006-03-29 09:46:27 +0000 UTC]

I suppose it is a bit sad though it's not suppose to be, I can tell you what inspired it later if you'd like. thanks for the comment

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clairzychic [2006-03-29 08:52:53 +0000 UTC]

How sweet julz!! ^_^ that is so like u xD i love it ^^

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Jewelia453 In reply to clairzychic [2006-03-29 09:45:14 +0000 UTC]

Thanks Claire!

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souless-prose [2006-03-29 08:33:14 +0000 UTC]

only one way to decribe it.... Bloody Brilliant. Love it

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Jewelia453 In reply to souless-prose [2006-03-29 09:44:37 +0000 UTC]

Cheers nice to know it's appreciated, thanks for the comment

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Eclipsing-Emotions [2006-03-28 23:12:55 +0000 UTC]

This IS quite a cute poem. A romantic and arm-clinging poem. I like how it is deep, relatable, and also not so long.

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Jewelia453 In reply to Eclipsing-Emotions [2006-03-29 09:43:49 +0000 UTC]

Thanks so much, ^_^ I like how you used the words arm-clinging

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