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Good day! LadyDemmona here to offer you critique for Critmas 2017, and well, because you asked for it. As I say in all my other critiques, my tips are meant to help not hinder, and I sincerely apologize if I offend you all during any of my critique. With that said, here it goes! The first thing I notice is her breasts (I promise I'm not a pervert, just something I noticed) Β Clearly you defined them, but because the picture is so dark, it looks like she doesn't have any. I think if you curved the lines of her cleavage more, it would stand out better, as well as a little shading. The spikes on her necklace look like they are drooping a bit, but as a beginning artist I am not quite sure how one would fix that. All I can do is point it out. Lastly, her nose is a bit sharp. I would recommend softening the lines up a bit. I think everything else is perfect though, and that you did a wonderful job on this piece. This is actually one of my more recent favorites. I hope you had a good holiday and are having a fabulous day!
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By the way, about her drooping necklace - it's okay because it's by design
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That's good to know, thank you so much!
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wee welcome XD
such pro much skills
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can I use this as my profil picture this image is so bloody good HHHH
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Wow, thank yeww ^.^
Yes, you can :3
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