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uhjessair [2023-04-25 12:02:39 +0000 UTC]
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ALittleMind [2009-08-04 22:23:32 +0000 UTC]
thats so sad.... D`:
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Jhost In reply to ALittleMind [2009-08-05 18:23:08 +0000 UTC]
I do like to write sad, dramatic pieces.
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wolfwaters [2007-05-28 21:59:03 +0000 UTC]
I would have wet myself in that sort of situation.
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Jhost In reply to wolfwaters [2007-05-28 22:26:03 +0000 UTC]
El oh el. ^_^
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wolfwaters In reply to Jhost [2007-05-28 22:52:39 +0000 UTC]
I would be like: OMG I'm-a gonna DIEEEEEEEE *gets shot* owwww...
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Storyweaver1 [2006-08-26 00:15:33 +0000 UTC]
I thought it was very clear that Rebecca existed durring the phone conversation. She's mentioned several times and Whitehead even says he can hear her.
Anway the script is what put your art on a different level. Not just that there is a script but that they sound like things that could actually happen, especially this one. It's not black and white. Although Murder is a little too far IMO. Did he come to do that get morphine or both?
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Jhost In reply to Storyweaver1 [2006-08-26 00:27:18 +0000 UTC]
Well, he mentions to his daughter on the phone that the doctor "could have saved her." Meaning that, whatever disease she was stricken with had become terminal. It is very possible that he had come to get the morphine to ease her pain, but rage (he had a "mad fire" in his eyes, which could also be interpreted as insanity, I see now) brought him to kill the doctor for not helping his daughter before it was too late.
There you go. Thanks for the comment!
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