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Jinbae — Distant Memories of War

Published: 2010-07-26 18:07:58 +0000 UTC; Views: 2568; Favourites: 36; Downloads: 0
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Description Yay finally done after multiple corrections
This is my contest entry for =hanel 's contest, Girlicious

Words Used
Fragile
Connection
Theme
Tragedy of War

Description / Story
The words Fragile and Connection mixed together can create a variety of themes, which in my case, created a very sad, scenic view of the effects of war.
The story behind this is where Sumiko(澄子) lives her life during a generation of war. Her Father and two brothers all head off to war to defend their country. Soon after, Sumiko and her mother received two letters stating that Sumiko's father and eldest brother were both K.I.A. A month later, another letter arrived stating that Sumiko's second brother has not returned from a scout mission and is possibly P.O.W.
Tragic from the loss of her brothers and father, she begs her lover to not head off to war. Unfortunately, he is drafted to the army without her knowing. Due to her great losses Sumiko faced, her lover wanted to tell Sumiko that he'd stay alive. Thus he sent Sumiko a letter every week. Then, on the 58th week, it was the first time Sumiko had not received a letter.
On the 57th letter she received, the last sentence merely stated:
"I got promoted to the cavalry, they want me to do some scouting pretty often. Some involving going behind enemy lines, but don't worry, I'll come home as soon as I get discharged, I love you,"
From that day on, Sumiko will always wait outside, no matter what the weather is or what her condition is. She will always wait, day after day, until her love returns, like he had promised.

The "Fragile" is shown on the tragedy of the story where Sumiko can break any moment like a thin sheet of glass due to her losses.
The "Connection" is shown on the part where Sumiko and her lover had kept connection, despite the fact that her lover was in danger of death the whole time he was away.

All Art done by me (Except fonts, which were obviously done by computer corp....)
DISTANT MEMORIES OF WAR© ARATHAR 2010 / JINGUK Inc.
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EDIT: August 26, 2010 [9:56 PM] Pacific Time
Added Kanji in the background saying, "I promise, For you, I'll wait forever" and changed color value to more "movie lense" style
Translations thanks to ~Zbun-bunZ
Typography Check up by ~thomaspatti

Disclaimer
This is NOT during WWII, it is in a fantasy world that apparently just resembles Earth 100% where war goes on the exact same way as our world...
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Comments: 30

jhaysaurer [2013-09-29 00:17:58 +0000 UTC]

nice one there... i like the drama present in the scene..

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Jinbae In reply to jhaysaurer [2013-10-13 20:23:09 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much!

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Magma-Storm-k90 [2011-02-23 17:21:02 +0000 UTC]

Really beautiful

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Jinbae In reply to Magma-Storm-k90 [2011-02-24 02:28:54 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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SodayakaSama [2011-02-23 01:35:51 +0000 UTC]

This is going right in my favorites. I think I want to cry...

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Jinbae In reply to SodayakaSama [2011-02-24 02:29:17 +0000 UTC]

haha Thanks! Crying can sometimes be a good thing

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tanya3286 [2010-12-07 18:44:54 +0000 UTC]

This piece has been chosen as one of the Featured Deviations of the Week by

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Jinbae In reply to tanya3286 [2010-12-12 05:35:43 +0000 UTC]

!!! Another feature??? Wow I never knew this would get such recognition! haha, wow thanks a lot! I think I probably got around 500 more views than normal due to all the features provided by your hard work! Thanks so much!

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tanya3286 In reply to Jinbae [2010-12-14 06:51:27 +0000 UTC]

bwahahaha.. Why, you are welcome!
Keep up the good work. (:
We would love to have your work at #Feature-Me-Weekly too.

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tanya3286 [2010-12-07 18:44:53 +0000 UTC]

This piece has been chosen as one of the Featured Deviations of the Week by

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booboojim [2010-12-07 07:37:03 +0000 UTC]

cool

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Jinbae In reply to booboojim [2010-12-12 05:35:57 +0000 UTC]

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Daroneasa [2010-11-26 14:32:08 +0000 UTC]

So sad, and moving. I really like the backstory, I want her brother and her lover to return to her...but I won't hold my breath. Poor girl.

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Jinbae In reply to Daroneasa [2010-12-12 05:36:55 +0000 UTC]

well whether her brother and/or her lover returns to her is solely up to your imagination... so far! Just in case I decide to make this into a full fledged manga haha
Thanks for viewing!

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red-winged-angel [2010-08-30 07:48:43 +0000 UTC]

Amazing!

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Jinbae In reply to red-winged-angel [2010-09-04 03:15:02 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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tanya3286 [2010-08-28 13:52:05 +0000 UTC]

did I or did I not tell you that I would feature this if i had premium?!
and Lo behold!! FEATURE - [link]
i love this piece!! pity that its showing up kinda small on the journal <3

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Jinbae In reply to tanya3286 [2010-09-04 03:16:52 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much! You're so nice haha!
Ah yeah it always shows up small 'cause it's really wide-screen, it's pixel makes it a dual screen size ahaha,
Thanks again for the feature! I'll definitely have much more publicity this way!

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tanya3286 In reply to Jinbae [2010-09-04 07:17:14 +0000 UTC]

its a brilliant image! ~sigh... it would look so great in a poster print! really. i mean it looks like an anime movie poster!
ur so very welcome!

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Jinbae In reply to tanya3286 [2010-09-18 18:32:59 +0000 UTC]

Haha well you're going to need a rather long poster paper to print this out then!

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Digi-Riff [2010-08-24 23:46:44 +0000 UTC]

Cool layout.

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Jinbae In reply to Digi-Riff [2010-08-26 15:19:45 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!

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zipchan [2010-07-29 17:52:29 +0000 UTC]

I love the fact that this just screams "movie poster." Nice work!

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Jinbae In reply to zipchan [2010-07-29 23:37:42 +0000 UTC]

Haha yeah that's what I was going for!
Tyvm!

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tanya3286 [2010-07-27 16:54:44 +0000 UTC]

OMG-OH MY GOD!! I can say that forever.... i love stories like this~~ how did u do such a marvellous-amazing-outstanding-brilliant-stupendous job??!!! I love mangas and animes like anything and stories like this can never get old or boring no matter how many times they are told!! >>her face, her expression, the snow, the emotions, the history and the story is all written perfectly in her eyes... >>look at it ..OMG!! i dunno wat to say except ....WOW! u captured it and nailed it right on the head baby!! ...its so heart rending ...and I hardly write such long comments so ...yea. im floored. ~ im a hopeless romantic<<
dunno y the damn views are so less#!%$%&^$...!! and omg, do u knw written Japanese to arrange the kanji like that??! then I would worship you

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Jinbae In reply to tanya3286 [2010-07-29 07:37:01 +0000 UTC]

Haha war tragedy stories are always a tear-jerker eh?
Ty so much for the awesome compliments and I'm honored to be of one to receive your long comments
Haha I'm still trying to make stories more tragic but for me, it always ends up going to comedy... haha oh well, more practice oughta fix that!
The views are always a problem haha
especially when it's me, who's in need of getting some money but there's really no one who'll commish me haha
So that's the main reason on why I'm entering these contests, to get more publicity, and these contests are rather random but very interesting
I'm still learning Japanese at the moment, so some of my grammar is wrong >.<
oh well, i have lots of Japanese friends who help me out on translation haha

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tanya3286 In reply to Jinbae [2010-07-29 07:58:18 +0000 UTC]

i would have so totally featured you if I had premium membership! >>dang BITCH of a DA >>they dangle all the spiffy stuff like carrots in from of rabbits >>and the ones who deserve them rarely get them! chheh..!
>> if there is anyway I can help you out lemme knw>> i 'll be happy to
if you are interested in commissions put that out in a bold - shout-out manner on ur page id or info! >> u will do a fab job im sure!
and zomg!! >>im learning Japanese too ..online though>>bummer!:-/
just taking the teeny tiny steps...its so darn hard >>but i love it..such a beautiful language >> i must have had a strong connection with Japan in a previous life, im sure of it!! ~~cuz im so totally in love with J-A-P-A-N!!

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Jinbae In reply to tanya3286 [2010-07-30 00:22:48 +0000 UTC]

Haha well DA has to earn money as well
Ah ty for your consideration!
xP haha I'll probably only be doing sketch commissions though
Japanese is actually pretty easy once you learn the basics
Or at least it seems easier 'cause I'm learning Chinese right now as well haha

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Minokaro-Ashell [2010-07-27 01:20:31 +0000 UTC]

Whoa what a heart-touching story
Anyway, the plain winter background looks lonely and sad, making the girl looks even more sad
Great job once again, keep it up!

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Jinbae In reply to Minokaro-Ashell [2010-07-27 05:13:00 +0000 UTC]

Haha yeah I would make it into an animation if only I had the time, motivation, determination, animation team, program, etc. hahaha
Ty

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