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Jinbeizamezama — Analysis - Liu, Dead or Alive?
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Description AUTHOR’S NOTE: I know this is a subject that is often debated and argued about, but these are my (GingaAkam’s) personal observations and thoughts. If your thoughts and personal headcanons do not match up, then I’m fine with that; to each his own. If you would like to have a logical discussion with me, then we can set up a time in the chatroom; I’m always up for a good and logical discussion or debate. Just don’t bitch to me that we don’t think the same, no one has the same thoughts as others all the time. We are all different and special, just like snowflakes and slenders –throws snowflakes and slenders- But if you decide that you must yell and flail your arms like a three year old, then I don’t have any respect for you at all. And I will resort to something that points to one of my nickname titles.

And onto the topic at hand:

Dead.

Definitely dead.

No but seriously, here's the short of it (completely forgot how that expression went): With Jeff's personality portrayed in his story, there's a very very very very very very -deep inhale- very very very very very small possibility that he would have spared his brother.

Here's the long version:

In Jeff's story he obviously cared for his brother and parents alike, like any normal kid would do. However, after his mental snap, he was obviously not a normal kid anymore; saying things like his new burned and bleached face 'fits my new personality perfectly!' (or something like that, too lazy to go back and grab the actual quote [also, HINT HINT, NEW PERSONALITY.]), burning his own eyelids off his face (gotta admit that takes a combination of guts and an insane mind to do), and carving his own face.

And then after that he kills his parents he goes off to kill his brother with the bloodied knife, giving him the iconic phrase of 'Go To Sleep', and I highly doubt that he meant 'Just go to sleep little bro, not gonna do anything with this huge ass bloody knife, I promise. Tomorrow we can go chase butterflies in the meadow again.'

With his 'new personality' he obviously killed or attempted to kill his brother. And he had obviously been successful with the murder of his parents, two grown adults, I highly doubt that a boy of around his age would be much of a challenge for him. On top of that, if you go for the 'Jeff tried to kill him but Liu survived the damage!' approach:

I say OBJECTION!

Jeff does not seem to be the type of killer who would leave someone to die on their own; he's more of the 'finish them off' and 'it's more fun to actually kill them' type of serial killer. And even if in the very very very very unlikely scenario that he did leave Liu to die, he was using a full sized butcher knife from the kitchen, pretty big and sharp, easy to slice vital arteries and veins. Liu would have quickly died, and be, well, dead.

And even with the unbearable amount of flaws in Jeff's story (once again, that's why I pick on him so much) I doubt that Liu would have survived.

He is dead, or at least that is what Jeff's story's original writer(s?) intended. Anything saying that he survived is most likely fanfic or OC based. I'm being as stubborn as Zehnder on this topic. The only thing that will change my mind is if there is a followup story to Jeff's proving that Liu is alive written by his original writers. And even then my headcanon would be that he is as dead as Scollex was near the end of Forgotten Past Part 1. And not in the way that he'll be back later, in the way as in dead means dead.

This being said Liu will NEVER appear in my art WITH THE EXCEPTION OF if he is a ghost, if it is a flashback or anything of that sort, or photographs or anything of that sort.

To me, Liu being alive at the end of Jeff's story is as likely as Zehnder, in that part of Sadist where Esther asked if she could stay with him (The day where they first actually talked, not the end), squeeing and then rapidly saying YES YES YES YES YES and then grabbing her hand and skipping like Pinkie Pie off into the sunset while making that squeaky bounce noise she makes.

The following was added as I was refining this for literature format, so it is new:

I am aware that there was a so called newspaper article about the ‘Woods Family’ who were killed and the oldest son being missing, and the youngest (can’t remember their age order, but I DON’T CARE.) in the hospital. However, I also know that this was proven to be a fake.

But on top of that, even if it WAS real and Jeff’s story WAS based on a true story, that means NOTHING. BASED on a true story means that is was BASED on a true story, not that it was a true story. Here’s an example, written in first person view with the protagonist being yours truly:

‘BASED ON A TRUE STORY: I was working on another comic on the computer, when I decided that I wanted something to drink. I walked out of my room, and it was about midnight so it was dark out. Sitting near an open window was my cat, Haru. She often sat there and looked out the window, but this time something was different. Her ears were laid back, and as I drew nearer, she was growling. I looked outside to try and see what she saw, and gasped a little. I saw a figure outside, a little in the distance, halfway hidden on the stairs. He was dressed in all black, and was taller than average. I looked at my cat, who was still growling, and then looked back up; the figure was gone.

I went to the refrigerator to get a drink, and walked back towards my room with some iced tea. When something I saw nearly made me drop my glass. I could see the figure again, he was right outside the window. My cat was glaring at him, hissed, and then trotted away with her tail large with fur standing up. I looked back up at the figure, and immediately recognized him. Why wouldn’t I recognize him? He was my own creation after all. The smoky tall man was Zehnder. His bandana was rolled up, revealing a snarl of crimson red teeth with a cigarette clenched between them.

Suddenly he disappeared into the shadows, and then reappeared right behind me.

“Dammit Ginga!” The menacing slender snarled “Why do you keep drawing me as a friggin’ pony!”

I smirked. “I can draw whatever the hell I want! And besides, you’re freakin’ adorable!”

“I am not!” He snarled, “Draw me killing someone or something!”

“In time, but for now, PONIES!” I said with a mocking grin. “Now go away, it’s midnight and I need to work”

“Fine. Just tone it down a bit, alright? No more blushing, dammit!” He snarled, and began walking towards the shadows to teleport away.

“Alright Zehnder.” I giggled, adding under my breath something else “I guess he hasn’t found out about that Zehndeff shipping.”

“WAIT, WHA-!?” Zehnder turned around suddenly and snarled viciously in confusion and horror.

“BYE BYE ZEHNDY-ZEHNDS!” I laughed as I shoved him into the shadows where he teleported away.’

You’re probably thinking something along the lines of ‘wait, you actually met Zehnder!?’ huh? Well, as I’ve said, that was BASED on a true story. That wasn’t the true story, it was based and inspired by the true story. This one to be exact:

‘THIS IS A TRUE STORY: I was working on something on the computer when I decided that I wanted a drink. I got up and left my room to see my cat sitting by the window. It was midnight, so it was dark. I walked over to pet her, and I noticed she was staring intently at something outside. When I looked, I saw something on the stairs opposite the window. It looked like a tall and dark figure. I looked down at my cat, who growled, but her eyes never left that spot. When I looked back up, the figure was gone. It could have been my imagination playing with the shadows; but you never know. I think it’s a fun little thing to say that Zehnder visited me and was pissed off because I had drawn him as a pony several times. I don’t believe it, but it’s a fun thought. I went and got my drink, and then returned to my work.’

See what I’m saying? Based on a true story does not mean that the story is entirely true. You can add things, or even take things away.

This being said, saying that Jeff the Killer’s story was based on a true story, means absolutely NOTHING to me.

And that is why I think that Liu is dead, along with my arguments. I’m sure I have more, I just have trouble thinking of them all at once. If I remember any, this will be updated.


EDIT:

Thought of something to add here that corresponds to another one of my analyses, 'Creepypastas and Characters' (Link in description)

CHARACTER Jeff MAY HAVE spared Liu. CREEPYPASTA Jeff would NOT have spared him. This is based on CREEPYPASTA Jeff, because well, it's based on his creepypasta. NOT a fanfiction. You can argue all you want with me, this is CREEPYPASTA Jeff.

And another thing, if Liu is a ghost, that means this is a universe where anyone can become a ghost after they died. Which means every one of Jeff's victims could become a ghost. Just following him around and poking him. "YOU KILLED ME. YOU KIIIIIIIIILLED MEEEEEEEEEE." I wouldn't like that for Jeff, would be annoying.  
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Comments: 321

NTSEFAN [2016-05-25 07:32:20 +0000 UTC]

I like to believe in my headcanon universe, Liu was taken to a laboratory to be used as a experiment by the government to counter Jeff. It's a long story.    

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XxAmerican-PsychoxX [2016-03-01 10:52:00 +0000 UTC]

Even if he weren't in his right mind, Jeff still had a smidgen of sanity left. Truth is; he wouldn't have stabbed Liu if he didn't wake up. My belief is, because Jeff was doing his first kills, he didn't know what he was doing. He stabbed Liu, but didn't hit any vital organs. So Liu, thinking about his safety, pretended to be dead while Jeff cut the smile in his face and cut him up. When Jeff left he called 911 and got to the hospital A.S.A.P...now, usually, the story says he wants to get revenge on Jeff and that he has a split personality, Sully...but I feel he'd stay at the CP mansion because he still cares dearly for his LITTLE brother.

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Goldie8900 [2015-12-29 01:56:20 +0000 UTC]

He might have become a gost so just sayin

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MashiManxxx [2015-10-13 17:34:14 +0000 UTC]

Which is why Homicidal Lui should NOT exist!

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JolteonUltra [2014-05-22 23:47:05 +0000 UTC]

Not only does Jeff not seem like the guy who would leave his victims to die on their own, he doesn't seem like the guy who would leave before making sure his victim is actually dead! I agree. It's illogical for Liu to have survived.

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XxAmerican-PsychoxX In reply to JolteonUltra [2016-03-01 10:53:11 +0000 UTC]

Remember, though, Jeff had just started killing. He didn't think about checking. Everyone thinks about this theory as if the Jeff they see now. The SKILLED killer. He is skilled because of practice.

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zelda806 [2014-03-02 17:50:01 +0000 UTC]

if zhender did do that holy fucking shit i would be scarred for life that in my opinion is so much scarier than splendy rage mode

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Shyartist245 [2014-02-15 06:33:08 +0000 UTC]

I wouldn't just follow him around, groaning, I would sit on his head and swing my legs back and fourth, while humming. When he would be going to kill though, I wouldn't stop him, I would get off his head, sit on something in the room, keep myself only visable to him, and stare at him. I wouldn't have my eyebrows raised like " are you really going to do this?" I would just stare at him.  

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CRAZY64KaT [2014-02-03 02:13:45 +0000 UTC]

I think liu's dead cuz just like you've said , Jeff had a whole new personality , since he could burn his own eyelids and cut his mouth,
why couldn't he kill his own family members ?

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shadowangle6 [2014-01-08 22:28:46 +0000 UTC]

To be honest, I believe it was up to reader to decide Liu's fate. Even after everything, I Liu would still love Jeff even IF (Note the IF) did live. I actually saw something where Liu also snaps and understands Jeff's need to kill because it's happening to him. I did hear a story on Youtube where Liu joined Jeff and Smile Dog, but it could have been in an alternate realities. I believe in them since I enter them when I sleep, and you never know what's going to happen.

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capitalofawesome [2013-10-29 21:48:23 +0000 UTC]

XD *poke poke* YOU KILLED ME!! *poke* YOU KIIIIIIILLED MEEEEEE!!!

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angryleo1998 [2013-09-23 01:00:35 +0000 UTC]

*sarcastic* yeahhhhh jeff totally did not do what is in his name

*note: in my stories each creepypasta has a civillean identity ex. jeffs is his pre face fuck up and mental snap jeffery*

jeffery: whats in my name?

nothing!

jeffery: okay. have the cops found liu yet

nope! *after shooing him away, in turn back to ginga* don't have the heart to tell him that he killed him

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kitkat3447 [2013-09-14 21:42:28 +0000 UTC]

I highly doubt that he meant 'Just go to sleep little bro, not gonna do anything with this huge ass bloody knife, I promise. Tomorrow we can go chase butterflies in the meadow again.'

XD That just made my day

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PlasticPromises [2013-09-03 01:07:47 +0000 UTC]

You have a really good point… also, is Liu older or younger than Jeff, if you know? Cause I see people saying either way in their fanfictions and it confused me lol… like I got the vibe from the creepypasta that Jeff was younger but then I see a video where Liu is younger and it confused me

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XxAmerican-PsychoxX In reply to PlasticPromises [2016-03-01 10:55:12 +0000 UTC]

Actually, in Jeff's origin, it says Liu is older. I looked.

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INGIJB In reply to XxAmerican-PsychoxX [2016-06-30 04:42:12 +0000 UTC]

Actually, in Jeff's ORIGINAL story (Sessur's 2008 story), Liu is the younger brother. By about 2 years.

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XxAmerican-PsychoxX In reply to INGIJB [2016-06-30 05:45:39 +0000 UTC]

Er, really? Oh, the story I read it said 'Jeff and his older brother Liu'

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INGIJB In reply to XxAmerican-PsychoxX [2016-06-30 05:47:43 +0000 UTC]

Yep. Sessur confirmed Jeff is older. Liu is 23. Jeff is 25.

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XxAmerican-PsychoxX In reply to INGIJB [2016-06-30 05:52:11 +0000 UTC]

Wow. Eh, everyone Canons the CP's their own way.

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INGIJB In reply to XxAmerican-PsychoxX [2016-06-30 05:54:38 +0000 UTC]

Yep. And that's fine. Just thought you would like to know.

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XxAmerican-PsychoxX In reply to INGIJB [2016-07-04 00:47:41 +0000 UTC]

Thanks for telling me.

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INGIJB In reply to XxAmerican-PsychoxX [2016-07-04 17:34:47 +0000 UTC]

No problem!

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Jinbeizamezama In reply to PlasticPromises [2013-09-03 07:39:44 +0000 UTC]

I don't know, personally I see Liu as younger. But that's only because I work with Jeff when he's a couple years from his story, meaning he's around 19-20 now. Whereas Liu died when he was what, 12? 13? So he remains a child in my mind where Jeff is a young adult. I haven't read his story in a while though so I can't remember what it actually said.

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SicilyNotDenmark [2013-08-31 16:27:37 +0000 UTC]

Liu is le dead, unless he becomes the alive walking dead. 




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WolfoftheWilds [2013-08-30 01:28:47 +0000 UTC]

owo What if zombie.

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Jinbeizamezama In reply to WolfoftheWilds [2013-08-30 12:50:26 +0000 UTC]

XD that would be interesting

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eiidolon [2013-08-30 00:00:37 +0000 UTC]

Ginga stop killing me with laughter and sarcasm XD

I doubt Liu is alive or that Jeff would have had a change of heart, In fact I doubt Jeff would even regret killing them.

so in my opinion Liu is dead...unless he was saved by a super sonic nyan cat with muffins for eyes named Lord Carl of the poptart cats...what I mean is IT'S NOT GOING TO HAPPEN.

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Jinbeizamezama In reply to eiidolon [2013-08-30 12:56:49 +0000 UTC]

XD I dun wanna.

and that would be interesting XD and then they all turn into midget alpacas and went out for chocolate milkshakes.

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eiidolon In reply to Jinbeizamezama [2013-08-30 14:23:25 +0000 UTC]

=A= noooooooo


0-0...at least they didn't turn into llamas with hats

XD Liu the midget alpaca

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dudeimhannah [2013-08-29 08:49:01 +0000 UTC]

I'm gonna use so many of these arguments against my friend when she says Liu could be alive. I get it's her own thinking and all, but if you think about it realistically, there's no way Liu could have lived....No matter how much I wish he did. 

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Jinbeizamezama In reply to dudeimhannah [2013-08-29 08:58:19 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, I think it would be nice for Jeff to have a live brother to hang out with; but it's very very very very very very unlikely.

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dudeimhannah In reply to Jinbeizamezama [2013-08-29 09:01:51 +0000 UTC]

Which is very very very very very sad. 👍: 0 ⏩: 0

MermaidCutie [2013-08-28 16:23:43 +0000 UTC]

"YOU KILLED ME. YOU KIIIIIIIIILLED MEEEEEEEEEE." I wouldn't like that for Jeff, would be annoying."  XD LOL that craked me up! XD

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Jinbeizamezama In reply to MermaidCutie [2013-08-28 21:21:08 +0000 UTC]

XD awesome

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MermaidCutie In reply to Jinbeizamezama [2013-08-29 15:29:39 +0000 UTC]

XD

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zackosletacos [2013-08-28 07:39:58 +0000 UTC]

"Just go to sleep little bro, not gonna do anything with this huge ass bloody knife, I promise. Tomorrow we can go chase butterflies in the meadow again"


Oh Gosh you killed me!! xD


"And another thing, if Liu is a ghost, that means this is a universe where anyone can become a ghost after they died. Which means every one of Jeff's victims could become a ghost. Just following him around and poking him. "YOU KILLED ME. YOU KIIIIIIIIILLED MEEEEEEEEEE." I wouldn't like that for Jeff, would be annoying."


You made my day !! xD


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Jinbeizamezama In reply to zackosletacos [2013-08-28 08:07:07 +0000 UTC]

XD I'm glad

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creepyfanfcition [2013-08-28 02:40:16 +0000 UTC]

Lolz ur funny

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Demonwolfgirl11 [2013-08-28 02:29:05 +0000 UTC]

I always wondered if he did survive how in the living fuck did he survive xD

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Ancientrock [2013-08-28 01:19:26 +0000 UTC]

Dude, that would explain why he's so paranoid! He keeps being bugged by the people he's killed! He has them screaming in his ears. I totally forgot what the condition for that in real life is, but it's like that. He's paranoid of fangirls because they would only add to the screaming. Whatever powers that the people/creatures in the Creepypasta/Horror Genre have pierce through the screams so he can hear them over the voices. Others don't have this. So, maybe the reason he gets drunk/high all the time is to get them out of his head. He's not insane anymore. He doesn't want to pay attention tot he voices, so killing is on of the few ways. When anyone else out of those two areas talk to him, like you or I, he has to tune in real hard. This would explain why he rarely talks to people like us. This would also explain why he doesn't like fangirls (as I've said before). Adding to the screaming, but far higher pitched, and totally without reason. The ghosts that scream at him have reason. He killed them. Now, long? Yes. Will a lot of people disagree with me? Um, that's no question. I think, though, that Liu doesn't blame Jeff anymore. Their parents are long gone, but Jeff feels the most grief and anger over himself about killing Liu. His brother is the only one that doesn't scream. Liu and him are okay now, and I think Jeff is happy to have his little bro talking to him NORMALLY. (I'd do italics, but I don't know how to them in this. XD) So yes, Liu = Dead. Has he left Jeff alone? Oh, hell no!
That's all I have.

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Jinbeizamezama In reply to Ancientrock [2013-08-28 07:13:22 +0000 UTC]

XD makes so much sense. New headcanon! It's really nice that he can talk to his little bro though XD I'm happy for Jeff on that part; not so much on the screaming ghosts though.

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Ancientrock In reply to Jinbeizamezama [2013-09-05 01:47:10 +0000 UTC]

Well, now we have to spread it around...

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shadowilinise [2013-08-28 01:15:05 +0000 UTC]

I, to be honest, agree...

Just reading this gives me goosebumps jeff story..no...THE PICTURE THE PUT IN THE CREEPYPASTA, scared my way of life along with BEN...couldnt play majoras mask for a while, but as a huge zelda fan I was like f-ck it...and play it again...


Jeff wouldnt let him survive, sometimes I thought with the phrase, go to sleep, he was just saying, ok go to sleep and think nothing happened here...but after a while..(and reading it again like 6 times) I thought....ok he is dead...



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theknightofthethorn [2013-08-27 23:59:59 +0000 UTC]

another thing that annoys me about jeff. in a lot of his creepypasta's shows him getting up after a near fatal experience like in the jeff vs jane. jane broke his legs and he got right back up. that's why I don't really like him. he is no longer human. 

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Jinbeizamezama In reply to theknightofthethorn [2013-08-28 07:16:01 +0000 UTC]

Meh, I don't count Jeff V Jane/Slenderman as canon. They are fanfictions. But even with that, Jeff falls into my category of 'altered humans.' He is technically a human, but different. Here's my view on this subject if you haven't seen it yet and want to read it gingaakam.deviantart.com/art/A…

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theknightofthethorn In reply to Jinbeizamezama [2013-08-28 10:36:53 +0000 UTC]

I read it many times. its just even if he is a 'altered human' he shouldn't even be able to get up after any fatal experience in just a few seconds.

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Shad0wFlight34 [2013-08-27 23:40:37 +0000 UTC]

I'm n0t actually interested in arguing the p0int 0f whether 0r n0t Liu's dead.

H0nestly, I agree with y0u.

H0wever, I w0uld like t0 p0int 0ut s0me stuff just fur the fun 0f it.

Having read the st0ry, (It's been a while, S0 furgive me if I'm a little hazy) it seems t0 me that his m0ther wasn't exactly the best parent... Fur 0ne thing, She was quick t0 dismiss Liu's inn0cence and simply g0t 0n with life. Err, Maybe I'm just sheltered, But w0uldn't M0ST parents l00k 0ut fur their kids a little m0re? *Shrug*

My sec0nd p0int is the birthday party: Jeff's br0ther had been sent t0 jail recently, (Ign0ring the fact that he was released, It's still pretty freaky fur a kid), She made him dress up and g0 t0 a little kid's birthday party despite kn0wing that he'd already had tr0uble, Als0 wh0 the hell makes their kid get all dressed up (She wanted him t0 have better than dress pants and a h00die) just t0 g0 t0 a little kid's birthday? Sure, They wanted t0 make a g00d impressi0n, But still.

My final p0int is when Jeff cut himself up, His mum g0es in and d0esn't even try t0 help. 

I think m0st mum's w0uld be all "0h g0d!" and run fur a first-aid kit 0r a ph0ne t0 call the h0spital.

N0t be all: "Suuuuure, Sweety, Y0u l00k beautiful... Lemme just get dad t0 see y0u t00..." And then tell her husband t0 "Get the sh0tgun". The FUCK?

Again, Maybe this is n0rmal in 0ther families and I'm just super sheltered. But I'm guessing n0t.

My purrs0nal headcan0n is Jeff's mum was a c0ntr0ll freak and p0ssibly a s0ci0path. She sh0wed her children little t0 n0 affecti0n and 0ppressed them terrierably. Jeff's dad was a push0ver wh0 was either t00 wussy t0 stand up t0 his wife, 0r simply didn't care.

If this was the case, Liu and Jeff were likely t0 have devel0ped an immensely str0ng b0nd, Since they were the 0nly 0nes t0 care fur each 0ther. 

Jeff was willing t0 stand up t0 three bullies t0 pr0tect his br0ther, This speaks 0f a str0ng br0therly b0nd.

With Jeff's snap, He w0uld still be unlikely t0 wish harm 0n his br0ther, H0wev-fur, he still did...

Maybe he was running 0n adrenaline and didn't think t00 much ab0ut it, 0r had s0me 0ther psych0l0gical reas0n fur d0ing it.

I think in his unstable state 0f mind, It was still t0 pr0tect him, Just hear me 0ut.

Sleep w0uld have been impurrtent t0 them, Since it was an escape 0f s0rts fr0m everyday reality. Jeff didn't say "G0 t0 sleep" t0 his parents (If I recall c0rrectly) but did t0 his br0ther befur killing him, Purrhaps in his mind he was sending him int0 "Permanent sleep".

This w0uld als0 explain why he targets families, He's re-living murdering his 0wn.

Bluh, I'm quite tired at the m0ment and I think my anti-depressants are kicking in...

I can't remember my p0int, But I just think it's an interesting discussi0n t0 have if y0u're interested.

I'd l0ve t0 hear y0ur th0ughts 0n my the0ry.

Thank y0u fur y0ur time.

*B0ws*

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Cloudedguardian In reply to Shad0wFlight34 [2013-08-28 01:31:30 +0000 UTC]

I really like your view on the story, and it's totally not because it's pretty close to mine. :liarjack:
Okay, not JUST because it's close to mine, it's really well though out too! And you're right, a normal mother's response would be to fret and worry, not to run to get a gun.
That said, I tend to think of most of the quirks in the story as just poor writing rather than character development, but if someone was to rewrite it properly, I totally think they should use your theory on their mother. That would just be awesome.

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Shad0wFlight34 In reply to Cloudedguardian [2013-08-28 01:35:17 +0000 UTC]

Thank y0u!

Yes, I agree.

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theknightofthethorn In reply to Shad0wFlight34 [2013-08-27 23:57:30 +0000 UTC]

the zeros

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