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Jinbeizamezama — NightStalker

Published: 2012-10-29 12:58:32 +0000 UTC; Views: 3328; Favourites: 55; Downloads: 5
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Description My monster Nightstalker. I love this little dude, he is my own masterpiece. I couldn't think of a better name for him that didn't sound lame for one of those names that sounds like someone just took an evil sounding word and put it in a translator.

Anyway, his story, here is a bit of it:


Something caused him to wake up. He slowly opened his eyes; he was facing the wall, so he rolled over get on his back. He sighed and scanned the room quickly, then froze. He was not the only one in his apartment; there was someone else there too. Maybe it was a thief, he quickly waved away that thought, because no one would steal from him, for he had nothing valuable to be taken. He strained his eyes, trying to adjust them to the darkness; the moment his eyes adjusted he jumped. His eyes met another pair of eyes, glazed over crimson eyes. He stared at them, frozen with fear. He began to adjust to the lighting more and began to see more bits of the owner of those eyes. The creature had a humanoid appearance, maybe six feet take. Its skin was a dark ashy color. The creature’s lower torso was ripped away, leaving mangled ribs jutting out in odd angles. If there were any organs there, they were gone, and instead there were strange vine like things in there. One of its legs had a bone sticking out, and both of its feet were missing two center toes and were split down the middle by a pike or a large nail. Perhaps most disturbing were its arms and mouth. Its arms were stuck together by large bolts, going straight through one arm and then through the other. There were three large bolts stuck in its arms. Its mouth was sown shut by three large stitches of a thick thread, so its mouth was shut tight, but one end of its mouth was open, the teeth were closed but the lips were open, revealing the sharp teeth beneath them.
Trent stared at this monstrosity, and the monstrosity stared right back at him. He wondered what he should do. It wasn’t a dream. It couldn’t be a dream. It was too real, but in his mind he prayed to a God that he didn’t believe in for it to be a dream.


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(I recommend reading the story before the creature's description, as the description might spoil the story)




Nightstalker represents attempts at suicide due to guilt or hatred. The bottom half of his torso is gone and in place of some of his organs are thick dark ropes, many of them tied into nooses. He has several bullet holes in the side of his head and one large shotgun hole in the back of his head, representing trying to kill yourself by a bullet to the head. He has a hole in his throat, representing ingesting or swallowing something to cause death. There is a hard to see scar on his left shoulder (from viewers point of view, right shoulder) that is in the shape of XIII, which is the Tarot card Death's number. One of his wrist's is slit. He has a chain around his ankle, representing death by being tied or stuck to a heavy object and dropped in water. One of his leg's bones is sticking out, representing death by falling from a great height, because if you fall from a high height and land on your feet your legs will probably break.

When NightStalker wants something to be done then he searches for someone who had the thought of what he wants done in their head, then he bugs them until they do it. He appears to them in the night with things such as arms bolted together or mouth sewn shut. The number of the bolts or stitches usually changes. Each day that the person does not do the action one bolt or stitch is removed. When his arms are free and his mouth is fully open, NightStalker then kills the person, eats them (or at least parts of them), and looks for someone else that has the same thought that he wants done. If they do do it then NightStalker is satisfied, but the person might not be able to live with the guilt, so for his last night with them he offers then a noose that he draws from inside his ribcage. If the person lives with the guilt and refuses the noose then he leaves.
Also he likes to laugh like a maniac and can speak telepathically, but most often says the words "Do it" and if they don't do it he kills them and says "Didn't do it". If they do it he says "They/He/She did it"
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Comments: 18

tultsi93 [2014-09-27 19:31:05 +0000 UTC]

Wow, awesome and creepy.

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Psychotic-Love [2013-07-04 02:54:08 +0000 UTC]

When I saw the nails at the foot, somehow, the sentence "he looks like Jesus's corpse" popped in my head.

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Jinbeizamezama In reply to Psychotic-Love [2013-07-04 04:20:21 +0000 UTC]

XD LOL

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Psychotic-Love In reply to Jinbeizamezama [2013-07-04 04:44:42 +0000 UTC]

IKR?!

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Psychotic-Love In reply to Psychotic-Love [2013-07-04 02:54:44 +0000 UTC]

Excuse me, *feet

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MrBlack091 [2013-03-20 13:50:29 +0000 UTC]

When I first saw this I was like 0_0 and then slowly Closed the page

His really cool but kinda SCARY looking the way his eyes staring at you it gives me the creeps *Shivers*

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Jinbeizamezama In reply to MrBlack091 [2013-03-20 22:10:31 +0000 UTC]

XD dem eyes

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Mytheerial [2013-02-15 02:56:22 +0000 UTC]

I cant see in the dark..............

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PH-mexicanfangirl17 [2013-02-10 19:11:35 +0000 UTC]

Freakin' epic! I love the story and what he represents! 8D

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Jinbeizamezama In reply to PH-mexicanfangirl17 [2013-02-10 22:02:10 +0000 UTC]

thanks!

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PH-mexicanfangirl17 In reply to Jinbeizamezama [2013-02-10 22:04:59 +0000 UTC]

^w^ You're welcome!

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Jinbeizamezama In reply to PH-mexicanfangirl17 [2013-02-10 22:01:30 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!

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PH-mexicanfangirl17 In reply to Jinbeizamezama [2013-02-10 22:04:41 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome!

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SirLowain [2012-10-31 09:26:24 +0000 UTC]

Love this. Especially love the symbolism
also how he kills them if they don't listen -u- that's awesome.

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Jinbeizamezama In reply to SirLowain [2012-10-31 10:44:00 +0000 UTC]

thanks

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Toxical-Toon [2012-10-29 13:08:46 +0000 UTC]

A real Badass! He looks so cool!

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Jinbeizamezama In reply to Toxical-Toon [2012-10-29 13:12:35 +0000 UTC]

Thanks

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Toxical-Toon In reply to Jinbeizamezama [2012-10-29 13:13:04 +0000 UTC]

No problem!

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