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JinDevilKazama — .Silver Moon.
Published: 2007-11-15 02:16:03 +0000 UTC; Views: 628; Favourites: 15; Downloads: 9
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Description Oh, silver moon
So high in the sky
Casting your illuminance all around
Brighten the dark
With your sweet light tendrils.
Banish the shadows away

Let me see the light
Silver Moon
So full, so bright
Won't you please
Shine on me tonight.

Bask me in your wonderous glow
So that I may know
What it's like to never have to face
The shadows again.
To know the fear
In the dark of night.



Oh, no, not I
For you will save me
And draw me, wrap me up
Beneath the light of the moon.
In all it's silvery heaven.
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Comments: 25

ShinyDragonfly [2008-06-29 11:36:20 +0000 UTC]

so beautiful

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JinDevilKazama In reply to ShinyDragonfly [2008-06-29 12:17:10 +0000 UTC]

Thanks so much!

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ShinyDragonfly In reply to JinDevilKazama [2008-07-01 09:52:28 +0000 UTC]

it was really my pleasure

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JinDevilKazama In reply to ShinyDragonfly [2008-07-01 17:43:01 +0000 UTC]

I really appreciate it either way!

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mynameistrouble89 [2008-01-20 04:01:16 +0000 UTC]

you're welcome! it's a wonderful poem

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JinDevilKazama In reply to mynameistrouble89 [2008-01-20 18:34:40 +0000 UTC]

I appreciate that.

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Beloved-Lily [2007-11-17 05:06:02 +0000 UTC]

So sorry its taken a while to reply and comment = =;
I usually wait for Fridays

But I love the works you've put up recently.
I .. enjoy the words you choose and the way you choose to present them.

"Bask me in your wonderous glow
So that I may know
What it's like to never have to face
The shadows again.
To know the fear
In the dark of night.
"

I love how that has a literal and spiritual sense to it, in that,
One can consider being literally wrapped up in a beautiful array os streamers of light, banishing the shadows.
Or,
The escaping of ill-fated thoughts, harmful ways and dancing blades that grow closer to the threads that hold us in the silver lining of the clouds.

Great job Jin. C:

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JinDevilKazama In reply to Beloved-Lily [2007-11-17 15:55:48 +0000 UTC]

Aww, you don't have to apologise. Not at all, I'm just glad you do take the time to make such lovely comments.

Aww, I always like how you love my work, even if I don't think it's all that good. Thanks so much hun. I really appreciate it, you know?

I'm really glad you liked this so much. Thanks again!

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Beloved-Lily In reply to JinDevilKazama [2007-11-18 23:12:45 +0000 UTC]

I watch people for a reason, I just take time to make comments for those closer to me than the popular artist's that get the constant "Omg this is cool" and "Omg I luv this, lawl" comments.

And I think you don't like it because you see things in it that others don't, silly. C:

^__^ No need for a thanks jin-san

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JinDevilKazama In reply to Beloved-Lily [2007-11-20 01:19:41 +0000 UTC]

Hehe, same here. I like making nice comments for the people I care about as well, sure it's nice to get comments like, "OH MY GOD!", etc, but not alll the time! XD

And you're right there I suppose, we are our own worst critiques, of course! And I like to give thanks!

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Beloved-Lily In reply to JinDevilKazama [2007-11-22 20:01:57 +0000 UTC]

XDD Indeed indeed!
I don't know how they can stand repetitive comments o o;;

Mmhm mhm! I tend to be hard on myself because I feel I /can/ improve.
And I like to give thanks as well xD;;

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JinDevilKazama In reply to Beloved-Lily [2007-11-23 02:36:54 +0000 UTC]

XD Same here, I like when people actually take the time to say what they like about the picture, or whatever it so happens to be. Even if it's only a sentance or something!

And yeah, like they say, and artist is their own worst critic! XD We just can't help but be hard on ourselves and such!

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Beloved-Lily In reply to JinDevilKazama [2007-11-23 03:36:56 +0000 UTC]

Oh yes yes..
It only takes thirty seconds, dear jesus T__T;

o 3o We're just cool.

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JinDevilKazama In reply to Beloved-Lily [2007-11-23 17:30:29 +0000 UTC]

Of course! Most people are just lazy when it comes to comments! XD

Not us though, because we are teh awesome!

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Beloved-Lily In reply to JinDevilKazama [2007-11-23 20:08:43 +0000 UTC]

C:< *stamps your forehead with "Teh Awesome"*

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JinDevilKazama In reply to Beloved-Lily [2007-11-23 22:16:42 +0000 UTC]

Yays! *Stamps you right back!*

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Beloved-Lily In reply to JinDevilKazama [2007-11-23 23:02:42 +0000 UTC]

OMG IT BURNS D:
..kidding. x3

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JinDevilKazama In reply to Beloved-Lily [2007-11-24 03:00:45 +0000 UTC]

XD Oh noes, burnings!

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Beloved-Lily In reply to JinDevilKazama [2007-11-24 21:10:54 +0000 UTC]

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sphirux [2007-11-15 02:37:57 +0000 UTC]

I find it wonderful, filled with imagery.

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JinDevilKazama In reply to sphirux [2007-11-15 17:24:59 +0000 UTC]

Aww, thanks. I'm glad someone does.

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sphirux In reply to JinDevilKazama [2007-11-16 00:40:23 +0000 UTC]

Pfft.
Many do.

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JinDevilKazama In reply to sphirux [2007-11-16 18:33:49 +0000 UTC]

XD I don't know about thaaaat.

People haven't been really responsive much to this one!
But oh wells.

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sphirux In reply to JinDevilKazama [2007-11-17 04:12:41 +0000 UTC]

That's sad. ><

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JinDevilKazama In reply to sphirux [2007-11-17 15:58:45 +0000 UTC]

Tis, but no matter.

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