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HE'S GOOOOLLLLDDDDDD!!!!!!!(lol u'll get the reference if u've seen the movie XD)
ok yes i knw i fail at wings and i thank u all for the constructive critisim XD really thank u
it helps me not hurts me lmao just motivates me to get better 
so thank ya <3so yea this design is for sale and i can also make a model on feral heart of him to if u want
price: 10 point
art: (me)
~jinx
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i own this now
YAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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why...
at the wrong times
i dont
have enough
POINTS!?!?!?!?!?!?
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lol its fine how much points do u have
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can u put him on hold?
i only have 1 T_T
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I would adopt this but I already adopted two other things and birthday money I have spent 7 points in a day it's kinda ridulous.
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if only people could be a little more polite and constructive in critiques..
the wings are pretty, but they are a bit off. think of a wing like an arm. the bend in them would be lower on the "arm", like near the elbow, if they're folded. here you've placed the bend a bit too high, more near the "wrist". referencing photos of bird wings can help you out, if you get a chance.
and yes, the wings are a bit too sparse in the feather department on the lower portions. full wings are pretty wings, and can help this wolf really take flight.
i really enjoy this design as a whole, though. the gold is lovely, especially on the top portion of the wings.
keep up the good work, and keep practicing c:
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thank u ryumi :3 yes i knw they are off but i fail at wings XD haha but thank u for putting it more polite and nicely yea have been looking at bird references lately
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you're welcome, jinx c:
and you don't fail as much as you think, these were a good attempt. practice makes perfect, that's all. i need major practice with bird wings, too, they really are hard
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Well you've folded them incorrectly. They do not bend like that and they're missing a rather large portion of their mass.
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i know but lol im still trying to practice its better than what i have been doing XD i know its pretty obvious to see how off i am and i was wondering if you can help me by showing me a reference i could look off of to practice it would help me a lot and i would really appreciate it
~JINX
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My scanner isn't working properly at the moment but I'll try to explain with words.
You've jointed the wing in four places as opposed to the major three. The major three should mimic a human being's own arm joints.
There's not enough mass on the arm bone itself to actually be able to contain enough muscles to produce enough lift for a creature of this size and not snap under the strain of sustained flight.
Wings are composed of feathers, not fur.
The length of the secondary "feathers" under the mass of the foreground wing are far too short.
This kind of pose for a wing would be very uncomfortable for a creature to hold for extended periods of time.
I'll link you some of my favorite wing tutorials and reference sheets.
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thank you
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