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Jish-G — New Polly Comic
Published: 2011-07-16 09:15:57 +0000 UTC; Views: 705; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 8
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I thought I'd take Polly into a more sci-fi direction. So this is the completed first page. It will be a little while until I start to put out regular pages and after a while I might look at getting a website for it.Its going to be much bigger and (hopefully) more professional looking than the last one (the first scene is 12 pages!). It will have lots of story-line, characters, aliens and shooting stuff up!
I would really love some feedback before I get started on the rest.
*UPDATE* I have completed the story board and the finished version will be 52 pages. That's actually way more than I anticipated but I like the story and I don't think it could really have much more cut out of it. It seems like this will be a long term project.
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Nice work on the face close-up. That shading looks really good.
also, background goings-on ++
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Cheers. The background was a REAL challenge. I have never been interested in drawing city scapes and so I had to learn everything and it was not easy. Even just the simple perspective of the last frame took me ages to sketch out.
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Hrm. The perspective/composition of the last frame is the least good/interesting of the four, too. Perhaps you could have moved the whole thing over to the left a bit? Get rid of some of that blank wall. Now that you mention it, I can see you had difficulty with it. The perspective lines on the bin and the pavement don't match up, and the imaginary line though the dude's hips also doesn't match the pavement. Perhaps this could have worked better with the camera pointing more down the street?
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I'm so excited to see Polly again! I loved the character and wanted more. This art here is gorgeous. I really like I've stepped into an amazing future world. I think you've gotten better at drawing people as well. The facial expressions are great!
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Thanks! 
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Hopefully more will be coming shortly.
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