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Well, Here’s a redo of the first Chapter of my First Fanfic I’ve posted on here. I’m still gonna complete it, but I simply just want to get the first 4 Chapters rewritten and edited, so I could be satisfied with them. Enjoy!

It had been one year, since Morgana was defeated. And life in the kingdom of Oceana was great. Queen Ariel and King Eric, had finally reunited with their Dad/Stepdad King Triton, ruler of the underwater kingdom of Atlantica, and their daughter, Melody, had just received a magic type of dust that could transform them all into Merpeople whenever they wanted. All they had to do was just sprinkle the dust upon their legs and wish to be mermaids or a merman, and they would transform. The same thing would happen if they wanted to turn back, but instead of wishing to become merpeople, they had to wish to become human again, and they would immediately turn back. By now, it was May 13, which was Two days away from the day, that Melody was born on, and everyone in the kingdom was trying to figure out what to do for her birthday. Melody at this time, was sleeping in her bed peacefully, when Ariel entered the room and gently woke her up.

"Melody? It's time to wake up. It's almost your birthday." Ariel spoke, as her Daughter rosed up from her bed, and yawned.

"Morning Mom." Melody greeted, trying to hide some nervousness in her voice.

You see, even life had been doing great so far for Melody, she was still worried about what would happen at this year’s Birthday, since last year’s Birthday was a disaster for her.

Even though Ariel couldn’t tell what it was in particular, she immediately saw that something was troubling Melody, so, she walked over and asked, "Melody? Are you OK?"

"Yeah, but I'm nervous about my thirteenth Birthday this year. I know that everything had been better, ever since I got to know my MerFamily better, but what if something bad happens again during this year’s Birthday? What if I make a fool of myself, like I did last year? Or worse?” She asked nervously.

"Oh, Sweetie, those are just superstitions. Nothing wrong is going to happen this year. I guarantee it.” She smiled, as her Daughter look up at her feeling better, but still filled with slight doubt.

“Are you sure?” Melody asked.

“Of course! We even got to talk with the Town’s Baker to use ingredients from Atlantica, so you can have a WaterProof Marble/Kelp Cake." Ariel replied, before covering her lips sheepishly, as Melody brightened up.

"A WaterProof Cake?…Y-You mean, we're going underwater for my birthday?!" Melody asked in joy, while her mother nervously giggled.

"That was supposed to be a surprise honey. And besides, the party isn't until the day after tomorrow." Ariel said, even though Melody was still just as excited as before upon hearing this.

"That's only a few days away! Now come on Mom! Let's go get some breakfast so this day will go by faster to get to tomorrow!" Melody replied, which caused Ariel to giggle.

"Uh, Melody?" Ariel called, getting her daughter's attention.

"What?" Melody asked.

“You forgot to brush your Hair, and get dressed." Ariel smirked.

"Oh! Sorry!" Melody exclaimed, in a somewhat embarrassed tone, as she allowed her Mother to help her brush her hair, and choose her Out for today, before she and Ariel went downstairs for a breakfast of Raspberry Scones and Milked Coffee for breakfast.

Little did they know however, that this birthday would change Melody's life in a way she never expected.

Special Thanks to MrToonlover83, for allowing use to use this Background he made.
www.deviantart.com/mrtoonlover…

Description
Well, Here’s a redo of the first Chapter of my First Fanfic I’ve posted on here. I’m still gonna complete it, but I simply just want to get the first 4 Chapters rewritten and edited, so I could be satisfied with them. Enjoy!

It had been one year, since Morgana was defeated. And life in the kingdom of Oceana was great. Queen Ariel and King Eric, had finally reunited with their Dad/Stepdad King Triton, ruler of the underwater kingdom of Atlantica, and their daughter, Melody, had just received a magic type of dust that could transform them all into Merpeople whenever they wanted. All they had to do was just sprinkle the dust upon their legs and wish to be mermaids or a merman, and they would transform. The same thing would happen if they wanted to turn back, but instead of wishing to become merpeople, they had to wish to become human again, and they would immediately turn back. By now, it was May 13, which was Two days away from the day, that Melody was born on, and everyone in the kingdom was trying to figure out what to do for her birthday. Melody at this time, was sleeping in her bed peacefully, when Ariel entered the room and gently woke her up.

"Melody? It's time to wake up. It's almost your birthday." Ariel spoke, as her Daughter rosed up from her bed, and yawned.

"Morning Mom." Melody greeted, trying to hide some nervousness in her voice.

You see, even life had been doing great so far for Melody, she was still worried about what would happen at this year’s Birthday, since last year’s Birthday was a disaster for her.

Even though Ariel couldn’t tell what it was in particular, she immediately saw that something was troubling Melody, so, she walked over and asked, "Melody? Are you OK?"

"Yeah, but I'm nervous about my thirteenth Birthday this year. I know that everything had been better, ever since I got to know my MerFamily better, but what if something bad happens again during this year’s Birthday? What if I make a fool of myself, like I did last year? Or worse?” She asked nervously.

"Oh, Sweetie, those are just superstitions. Nothing wrong is going to happen this year. I guarantee it.” She smiled, as her Daughter look up at her feeling better, but still filled with slight doubt.

“Are you sure?” Melody asked.

“Of course! We even got to talk with the Town’s Baker to use ingredients from Atlantica, so you can have a WaterProof Marble/Kelp Cake." Ariel replied, before covering her lips sheepishly, as Melody brightened up.

"A WaterProof Cake?…Y-You mean, we're going underwater for my birthday?!" Melody asked in joy, while her mother nervously giggled.

"That was supposed to be a surprise honey. And besides, the party isn't until the day after tomorrow." Ariel said, even though Melody was still just as excited as before upon hearing this.

"That's only a few days away! Now come on Mom! Let's go get some breakfast so this day will go by faster to get to tomorrow!" Melody replied, which caused Ariel to giggle.

"Uh, Melody?" Ariel called, getting her daughter's attention.

"What?" Melody asked.

“You forgot to brush your Hair, and get dressed." Ariel smirked.

"Oh! Sorry!" Melody exclaimed, in a somewhat embarrassed tone, as she allowed her Mother to help her brush her hair, and choose her Out for today, before she and Ariel went downstairs for a breakfast of Raspberry Scones and Milked Coffee for breakfast.

Little did they know however, that this birthday would change Melody's life in a way she never expected.

Special Thanks to MrToonlover83, for allowing use to use this Background he made.
www.deviantart.com/mrtoonlover…