Cimar-WildeHopps [2017-03-07 07:02:28 +0000 UTC]
Loving it! The suspense was built up perfectly and you handled everything in this chapter so well! Now Judy, go after your fox!!!!!
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InTheLionsDen [2017-02-11 01:11:39 +0000 UTC]
Marvelous drama and story. Looking forward to chapter 5 to find out:
- Why the cavalry arrived when they did.
- Will they catch Catalan before he can escape Zootopia, (Perhaps Nick can do a Die Hard/John Mcclane action move and blow up the departing plane in the air after having a fight on the wing.)
or will Catalan become the recurring arch enemy that always gets away? (This seems to be very rare in Zootopia fan fiction as Nick and Judy always seem to get their mammal, eventually.)
- Will Judy reaffirm her belief that having a romantic relation with a predator is just "A stupid nothing."
- Will Nick find someone to bring Wilde Times back to life in some way, perhaps using his fame as one of the Heroes of Zootopia to become a PR partner or associate in some way.
Thanks again for the chapter.
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