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Published: 2009-04-27 02:14:20 +0000 UTC; Views: 559; Favourites: 24; Downloads: 12
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Description all the words
all the senses
all the dirt and smell and roughness
the bursting heart
fresh cold water
CRASH of waves and then the ache within
trickling nothing tears and itching legs

all these things

someone wrote them, a bit.



How can you tell anyone
else? How can you thrust
the living today
into someone else's soul?

This is just a nut in a banana leaf.
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Comments: 4

135711cal [2010-11-20 12:01:16 +0000 UTC]

The way my heart leaps
when she comes near me
and when her eyes met mine

like yesterday

how can I let you see
what I feel
or better yet
feel it also

when all I have is words

(I like your poem)

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pardonM3 [2009-06-09 18:48:35 +0000 UTC]

I am a nut in a banana leaf, at times.

And I agree with *YouInventedMe

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YouInventedMe [2009-05-12 04:48:31 +0000 UTC]

love that first stanza

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johohanna In reply to YouInventedMe [2009-05-12 18:15:22 +0000 UTC]

Thanks

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