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Published: 2017-07-05 05:29:14 +0000 UTC; Views: 659; Favourites: 19; Downloads: 0
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This is my really firts try in semi realism style on my oc Anny White
I put a little 16hrs of works 
i wish to see your critique ^^ I'm very began on this style and so i need to see what you think about it ^^ its gona help me to Learn
*the medaillon she have on her neck was created by my friend Kali-Mav i'm not very great about created little detail yet ^^
Anny white and art belong to me
Medaillon design was made by my lovely friend
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So sorry for taking me this long for this ^^' I kept postponing for when I had a clear mind <3 First of all?? Let me tell you that you've gotten so much better since your Undertaker portrait??? It's so great to look at the difference e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b… " width="15" height="15" alt="
I think what needs more attention is to try and shade the whole picture like you've done the face. The nose especially looks amazing, the nostrils do need a bit more definition, but other than that the nose is really on point! It's a great mesh of soft and hard brush strokes that I think you should keep. For example the outside of the lips is too hard compared to the nose, but I think lips is the hardest (for me at least) to blend into the face and still keep the shape right.
Same with the hair, it would fit better with semi-realism if the strokes weren't so hard from the top. You could try blending the roots, or using lower opacity in the beginnings so that it would not look separated, you could also try adding a couple very thin hairs where there is a straight like (like in the upper back of her head) cause hair don't naturally fall perfectly,
(I love that nose, let me tell you again how much I love that nose). Also how intense both her and Undertaker look in your portraits! They really do stare into you e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b… " width="15" height="15" alt="
Just a little more thing that I find makes a huge difference even though it's not something you really "see". Try adding small shadows where something touches anything else, the under part of her choker, where the hairs touch the skin. It's not a big thing, but it makes objects look like they are on different levels and really brings them out!
I hope we get to see more pieces like that from you <3
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Hehehe don't worried dear ^^ I was soo sure that you found a time to tell me a critique. And I'm soo happy to have taked a time for me and i just want to hug you as a thank you 
Hehehe well i think a little that my semi-realism style is improuved XDDD since its my second time i try totally in digital. I have made tome of other try but nothing great and beautifull was done.
loll the nose is also one of my favorite part in this painting, i always loved to create nose and eye. its kind of sad to me that its soo hard to paint hairs XDDD ( well after practice I'm sure i will win my perfect way XDDD )
Your view is really helpful, i din't notice that i would use a little more shadow on some point of the portrait, where its very important to me to learn. And of course the lips was also my nightmare. paint in natural colors of the skin is something easy for me to do normally but this time its differente. My oc have lipstick colors... where i found a great challenge. So yeah next time i will use a bit more the same work as the nose 
Again dear thank you soo much for taking a moment to write me a little critic. its soo sweet of you my dear friend
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Dear, for your first try, this is amazing. I know when I did my first try it did not look as stunning. Her eyes draw me in first, which is good! Hair is always something tricky to master when you try for realism. It is so easy to cel shade hair that when you want to add more dimension it can be difficult. You are almost there. I use many tutorial by artists to get ideas for hair and skin. I am still learning too, and have much to still go. Someone pointed out her chin, it may be a tad too long for female face. Her nostrils need more defined shading, not so blurry. Her lips are gorgeous, and beautifully done! Maybe take a light brush of pink on low opacity to the cheeks, this is new I learned myself, to add to skin tone.
This piece is beautiful and your art grows and grows so much each new thing you post. e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s… " width="15" height="15" alt="
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Awww thank you soo much to make me a little critique
yeah you got a point concerning the nose, unlike the undertaker semi-realism I have did last year, the nose was more definite
Concerning using pink colors, well I have give a try but I wasn't in love with the result. But next time I will think about it ^^
Thank you soo much again and is fun to know that my art continue his evolution ^0^/ well I do my best hehe
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I got your tag dear! I will try to do this quickly before bed XD I am surprised you are still up lol! So the first thing I noticed is her chin. I literally JUST learned that I was doing the exact same thing with my Neirah. There is too much distance between her chin and lower lip. Women, especially types like Any, I think, have a rounder face. Not so long. I think you would find that she is a lot 'cuter' looking if the length of her chin was half as deep ^^ Her nose is really well done! My only thought is that the bridge (the flat light part) may be a little wide. It makes it look a tiny bit masculine. But the length and width of the nostrils are very good! Her eyes are fantastic and beautifully placed. The shading of her cheeks after also very well done! Her hair could use a bit more volume at the roots, but that is very hard to do when they also have bangs. All in all, she is very beautiful, dear!
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Thank you soo much dear for your critique ^^ its really appreciate I'm happy that you like it ^^
you have right concerning the chin apparence I have try to correct because at firt her chin was more bigger ( longer ) than this, so I decided to leave that as its look now. I was too afraid to destroy the total piece, its also a good point for the hair and of course its true its hard to paint with the bangs
By looking on the semi-realism I did on Undertaker, I think I have improuved a lot
My next semi-realism will be on my oc Yaël or James ^^ I think those 2 will be great challenge.
Again thank you for the help dear
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