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jojogape — 109: Foul Play
Published: 2011-01-03 14:33:48 +0000 UTC; Views: 906; Favourites: 4; Downloads: 3
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Since the fail of the previous day, things have gotten worse. Dozens of children around the world have been moved to hospital with serious arrhythmias, especially in Japan and Germany. The whole group wakes up early, and gets down to work.The Replika looks like the Mountain Sector. Yumi, Aelita and William go for the supercomputer while Odd and Ulrich defend the Skid. Jeremy recieves a call from Yumi's parents: Hiroki is in shock, and the number of sufferers is increasing.
Aelita deactivates the security, but the last door remains closed. Yumi opens it with her telekinesis and passes through, and when she stops using it the door closes again and crushes William. Instead of a supercomputer there's a huge number of normal computers. Aelita is at the other side of the door, so Yumi creates a short circuit with her fans and all the computers break.
The game's servers stop working, but the children are still sick, so Jeremy does a return to the past. "The Code" ceases to exist, as nobody created it...
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Comments: 19
I want to create a new story code lyoko but I do not know how to make writing such forms
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You mean the writing style? It just takes pratice, really. In my opinion, the first episodes are kind of dumb compared to the last ones.
The real reason why they are so short is because I wasn't very fluent at writing, so I didn't want to include dialogue.
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it's ok the real first episode was clumsy so you are excused and besides , it's like reading real CL episodes
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Also it's from 2010, mostly. I can guarantee my writing skills are like 10 times better now. Also I was lazy. But thanks for reading!!
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i like "short stories" . i don't like to real 2 pages of an episode -_-
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Well, the episodes do get a bit longer, but yeah, they're still shorter than the average fanfic.
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i'll be honest , it's so.. accurate to the original , it's seems to me that is not a fan-fic but an "unofficial season"
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Thanks!! That's the feeling I try to convey with my stories, the feeling that you're watching an actual new episode of the show. Glad to see it's working~
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yeah , in fact.. i have an idea that might not work...
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code lyoko : revolution ( a fan-made season 5 / new series )
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I think some fanfic already had that name, or maybe it's just that it's similar to Evolution, but hey, go ahead, you might be surprised :3 I didn't plan to have people reading even six years after I begin the fanfic yet here we are haha
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well... the name is still WIP i just thought it would be funny as a WIP name , like melony.
anyway , it takes place years after the 4th season (chroicles and evolutions don't exist).
Aelita and Jeremie have twins (jeremie jr and aelita jr)
yum and urlich have a daughter (yumi jr)
all of them are in kadic academy and they meet a guy who he and (yumi jr) have a crush on each other
and a guy that has a mascot suit.
and some characters will also be added .
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Aw :3 Well, I wish you the best of luck~
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well... you can help me with the scenarios
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I think it's best if you do it yourself, trust me. I'm really out of touch with Code Lyoko now, I haven't even watched a single episode of Evolution (yet?), and I'm currently fully occupied with my current fanfic.
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well... let's just say that season 1 is better than evolution
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I'm still probably gonna watch it, eventually.
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ok , watch it with your own caution
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