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Brittaneymcavey [2014-11-21 18:35:03 +0000 UTC]
Wow... this is absolutely AMAZING!! So very inspirational and filled with heart! When was this written?
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JonathanReese In reply to Brittaneymcavey [2014-11-21 18:40:47 +0000 UTC]
This was actually written over a couple of years. I think I finished little less than a year ago...maybe more?
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Brittaneymcavey In reply to JonathanReese [2014-11-21 18:57:28 +0000 UTC]
oh well wow this is incredible. idk if this was a real life inspired piece from your own personal experiences with your sweet wifey just an inspired piece but its FANTASTIC I mean it. I think this is one of my favorites although I strongly relate to the others
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GwenneAreble [2014-11-20 02:31:48 +0000 UTC]
You had me reading to know what happened and I was sucked along for the ride of your poem, such feeling in your words! Is the poem a work in progress? (I'm just asking because of the "..." at the end)
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JonathanReese In reply to GwenneAreble [2014-11-20 08:45:59 +0000 UTC]
I originally did it with my guitar, and that last section below the **** is like the chorus and it fills different sections of the poem the ... leads into the next section. To keep the poem short I just removed it and threw it down there once.
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GwenneAreble In reply to JonathanReese [2014-11-21 07:26:54 +0000 UTC]
Oh, that makes sense, thanks! It would make a lovely song
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