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PLEASE FULLVIEW!. . . .modeling: sloane
. . . .photo/post-processing: me
. . . .October 13, 2008
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AMAZINg picture
it shows much emotion!
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thank you so much :]
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So beautiful, it reminds me of both life... and death, and the happiness and sorrows of all of her.... (
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I am glad that you like it so much and I also
like to read how people interpret the meaning behind my photos...
your comment was actually beautiful.
Thank you
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Hi! This wonderful work is featured in my new News article!
It's here: [link]
Have a good day and lots of tasty cupcakes for tea
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thank you!
it's just a local park
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This deviation has been featured in my news article [link]
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the title reminds me about vampires
beautiful picture
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haha that's actually where i got the title idea.
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thanks!
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i have featured this in my recent journal!
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Ok... this is an interesting idea... however... whatever you did to her in post processing...doesn't do the photo any favors... it looks like you tried to add color to her hair to differentiate it from the shadow in the bench... and it just looks incredibly fake and has sharp edges and yeah... not positively contributing to the photo.
Otherwise though, nice idea, nicely executed. I might try and clone out the green leaves at the bottom... and perhaps try and get the whole bench in there the next time you're trying something like this? Specially in this sort of situation, either want a decent portion of the object cut off... or not any at all... here it really looks like you snipped off a bit, and it takes distracting.
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Thank you..
and I didn't add any color to her hair, so I'm not sure what happened there.
I don't have photoshop, so I can't do crazy-complex stuff..
I basically just desaturated and made the entire picture a little darker.
There is a texture overtop of it...
that might be it?
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The positioning is great!
And I really like the scattered foliage.
I know you didn't really do that part... but I just love autumn.
Great photo.
The end.
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Haha, this is crazy, but some of the foliage is due to 'me'!
Before taking this picture, I was taking pictures of the girl standing
with leaves blowing around her. It really wasn't windy, so ~Artisticforlife13
came up with the awesome idea of beating the tree with a big stick to get leaves to fall.
Wow do I sound crazy or what?
thank you so much!!
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Sounds hysterical.
Will you have more from this shoot?
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No, not on deviantart.
But if you check out my flickr there are a few more pictures!
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Beautiful and a stunning piece, amazingly well done and i love this very much, great work too
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i really like the angle of this and the fallen
leaves! also that this is a new model and
the way she's laying on the bench!
think it would be more
but i also think it would be more
effective if it with horizonal either
way or maybe in black and white?
but it's beautiful!
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thanks so much!!
the model is actually just the little sister
of one of my best friends who wanted me
to take pictures of her
haha and i have posted this picture
on flickr, just in different colors
(Black and white being one of them),
but i liked this one most..
heres my flickr:
[link]
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This is beyond amazing!
I have absoutely no critique for this photo.
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it really means alot that someone really likes one of my pictures.
that hasn't been happening, lately
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Oh I highly doubt you haven't been hearing that lately!
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hm, your doubt is wrong!
I haven't been.
but now you said it. yay!!
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Ah! That is awesome! The outfit, the pose, and of course the location! I love the concept here. It's so artistic! Lovely job, Joni!
(Oohh! I got a petticoat today!)
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Thanks so much!
I think it's awesome how people like the pose,
and the model isn't really a model;
she's actually the little sister of one of my best friends,
and she wanted me to take her picture!
(Ah and I'm jealous you have a petticoat!)
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I assumed she wasn't a "model", but in the photo, she is. And it worked well because she's young! So it has somewhat of a childish feeling... sorta. 
(I am excited to have a photo shoot with it soon! I gotta make up the outfit. But I bought a dollar fake black rose at Walmart too.)
I have been lacking in creativity. It turned more into...just regular posed shots and nothing conceptual, artistic....I need to get creative again!!
I think I liked when I had ideas back in the Kodak days!.. I'm so boring now.
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Are you kidding?
If your photos weren't artistic,
they wouldn't be as loved as they are.
People like your pictures 1034729875 times
more than they do mine! Haha.
Mine haven't been artistic lately.
But I have a bunch of new ideas,
so I'm hoping to have alot of shoots
before it gets super cold!
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PSH. Well, I adore your ideas and photos very much more.
We just complain too much!!
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and I think that photographers wouldn't be quite as photographer-like
if they never complained about a lack of ideas
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Wow, excellent photo! I love your work with the color and the perspective really makes the shot!
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