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JordyDork — Whats Happening

Published: 2016-07-12 22:43:53 +0000 UTC; Views: 679; Favourites: 22; Downloads: 0
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As leader of his pack Mark watched over his Raptor friends as the sun went down. Yami, Bob, and wade were resting after a long day of hunting for food. Jack, Felix, and Ken were of patrolling the perimeter of there home and should be returning shortly. Mark turned to look over the horizon of the ocean since there home was on a cliff and they had a great view of sunrises and sunsets. He felt the Ocean wind blow his red hair back and skim his scales. 

Then mark suddenly heard a familiar Barking sound. It was Jack Felix and Ken returning from patrol. Jack was leading so he sounded of his call to let Mark know they were approaching. All three raptors appeared from the bushes. The friends greeted each other and Mark allowed them to eat the rest of the food they had.

Mark turned his attention back to the ocean. He didn't know why but he had a strange feeling something was wrong.
''Hey Mark" hearing his name Mark turned his head to the soft voice seeing his young friend Yamimash. "Hey Yami" Mark replied. "you ok man?" Yamimash asked. "yea I'm fine" Yami nodded.

Then suddenly the wind blew harder making the trees shake rapidly getting the whole packs attention. A tiny speck of spark landed by Marks 3 clawed foot. He bent down the smell it "Fire?" Mark thought to himself. What sounded like thunder turned to giant flaming rocks fall from the sky. Mark moved his head side to side seeing the rocks fall all around him everything around him and his friends were being engulfed in flames.

Marks pack of friends were all gathering around him hoping not to loose each other. "Mark whats happening?!" Yami said to his leader starting to panic. " I don't know Yami?!" mark barked. The atmosphere was getting worse with smoke making the Raptor friends have a much harder time to breath. Looking up at the sky Mark just froze in panic he didn't know what was going on or what to do.

Mark? Mark! Jack shouted trying to get his attention. Yelling wasn't working so Jack rammed Marks side with his head snapping mark out of his trance. "I'm sorry Bud but we cant stay here we need to find shelter" Jack shouted trying to reason with his best friend. "right everyone in the cave" Mark commanded. With that said every pack member sprinted towards there cave Mark being the last to enter making sure all his pack members made it to shelter safely.

Mark had everyone go to the very back of the cave to escape the smokey atmosphere. Catching there breaths the raptors all looked to one another glad that they all made it to shelter. Now they were all wondering what tomorrow will bring.


Hope you all like this story let me know if I should continue it. I really like this AU I'm glad I'm doing this and I'm having fun with turning these guys into raptors and I hope you are all to.

Until next time see ya!
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Comments: 9

soxkittygirl [2016-07-14 17:26:42 +0000 UTC]

cool

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JordyDork In reply to soxkittygirl [2016-07-14 19:42:21 +0000 UTC]

thx

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TarKarRisk [2016-07-14 06:12:37 +0000 UTC]

Ooooo!! I'm intrigued by this story! XD Awesome job!!

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JordyDork In reply to TarKarRisk [2016-07-14 13:34:08 +0000 UTC]

thank you! glad u like it

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Ilikepenguinsforever [2016-07-14 04:27:07 +0000 UTC]

cool

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JordyDork In reply to Ilikepenguinsforever [2016-07-14 13:34:15 +0000 UTC]

thx

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Ilikepenguinsforever In reply to JordyDork [2016-07-14 14:40:18 +0000 UTC]

Welcome

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MoonlightsFoxes [2016-07-14 04:01:42 +0000 UTC]

Noice 

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JordyDork In reply to MoonlightsFoxes [2016-07-14 13:34:24 +0000 UTC]

thx

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