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Published: 2007-08-04 06:00:12 +0000 UTC; Views: 15977; Favourites: 133; Downloads: 230
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yeah yeah more beatingRelated content
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That was a NIIICE flooring by her foot, she has some strong kicking that would rival even Chun-Li's....or probably Bruce Lee....nah, let's not go that far. XD But Lia is hella strong!
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*Waves hands infront of your eyes* Uuuuh...amigo? Todavia sigues en planeta tierra? o_o
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Buena composición. Por cierto, la niña del comic que comenté anteriormente, es hermana de Lia o algo?
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nopes...es solo otro personaje...no suelo pensar mucho la historia de este tipo de comics...quizas vaya siendo tiempo de darle algun tipo de trasfondo y hacer algo mas en serio...aunque con el tema no se puede hacer mucho.XD
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Hmm...the art seems good in this, but the pacing seems a bit weak. Most of the panels, in this and the other comics, focus around fighting, and mostly from the same angle. Obviously this is supposed to be an action comic, so I'd either use less words and change the angle on a few pieces to keep the viewer's interest or portray the wording in a more interesting way. The "still camera" effect has got to go, though. I guess it isn't so much the angle, as the fact that it's always zoomed in to the same place. The camera never really pulls back at all. Sorry to nitpick. The actual layout and art is great. I just think it could be better with a bit of work.
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I´m stunned.you´re the only person who encourage me to do it better.Thanks ....you´re great.
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Well, you never seem to get honest critique these days, and that's one of the best parts of DeviantART: that there are people there that know enough about art to give it to you. I'm glad you took it so well, too. You seriously are an awesome artist.
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uff....I´ve seen that the people here are high ranked artist...I have to thank you for your time and for your opinion about my "work".I´ll thinking in your words next time I´ll draw...
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uh...thanks for your opinion....beating is good...someway.....yeah....XD depends who gives the beating and who gets it....
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Either way, really well done.
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thanks again.if you have any request...just ask.ok?
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