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chees3boy2222 [2011-02-13 18:06:00 +0000 UTC]
I would love to use this charachter for an anime
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thirteenth-Capricorn [2010-04-15 13:06:02 +0000 UTC]
I'm loving how you drew the falcata. And again, the detail you put into your pieces! Simply amazing.
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Galactic-Marine [2008-03-12 05:57:06 +0000 UTC]
VERRY COOL! Only one thing, Roman men had short hair in there culture...
They also invented the "military cut" very very short hair or shaved off; its so the enemy can not pull it in battle...
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Archaia [2007-05-31 18:04:35 +0000 UTC]
He looks lovely with his bright eyes, and the uniform is great. Though I would loved to see a dacian uniform. Is he Dacian?
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steakslim [2005-10-02 05:33:05 +0000 UTC]
Nice picture, I typed in segmentata and round it, not expecting to find anything. I'm not history major, so i'm not gonna go into any details about the armor or architecture which I'm sure people have already commented those to death already since last year on this pic.
The only glaring innacurracy to me is the sword. I dunno if anyone's mentioned this yet, or if you already realise it so forgive me if I'm repeating what you already know (not sure what you ment about your statements in your comments on the picture), but a falcata, kopis, or machiara (all the same sword more or less) would not be held that way. In the pic, the part of the blade that's facing him, that curves forward, is the front. It would be held like any normal sword would, but with the concave side of the blade as the part that kills. So right now you have the sword backwards, and upside down, both of which wouldn't make it very useful since it is a chopping/slashing weapon.
It's basically a sword that evolved starting from the egyption pole axe, then to the khopesh (egyption short sword), then to the form it is in your drawing as the greek kopis that was later adopted heavily by Alexander the Great since it's a light sword (only 2 1/2 to 3 lbs) and can deal heavy blows (which is why the handle is curved like a cane, to prevent it from slipping out of your hand). It changed little over the years, gaining the name Falcata when the Celt-Iberians of the Roman times started using it. It now exists mostly in the form of Kukri and Gurkha knives.
Dispite that he's holding it wrong, it is a VERY nicely drawn falcata, and a nicely drawn picture
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steakslim In reply to joriavlis [2005-10-02 21:20:08 +0000 UTC]
Yeah it is a neat sword, a preticular favorite for me just for looks alone. So far that I know, it isn't something that requires any special technique to use, it's pretty much an axe in the form of a sword. If you ever see the film Alexander, you see a lot of it in use in the battle scenes.
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joriavlis In reply to GreenSprite [2005-05-04 20:53:43 +0000 UTC]
Hey hey, thanks, I will try to do some more forest and mountains next time (maybe I'll draw the roman army next to the iron gate, it will be cool, it seems that the danubius freezed in that time - sounds quite impossible - ).
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wingsofwrath [2005-04-06 19:16:37 +0000 UTC]
Okay... You’ve got a number of historical inaccuracies in your picture, as well as a quite severe perspective error.
Hope you won't get too offended by my critiques....
So, first about the botched perspective: his cicilum should have followed the curvature of his outer hip on the far side of the drawing, as this way it gives the impression of ending just past his fingers, a most unsetting effect.
Historical details: First off, the name of the citadel is Sarmisegetuza (just as my country's name is written Romania- I'm sure it's written Romenia in your language, but after all, it is best to pronounce and write the names of places as they are originally, rather than translated in your own tongue- in Romanian the name of your capital is written Lisabona, yet I like to write it Lisboa).
Also, there were actually two different Sarmisegetuzas: Sarmisegetuza Regia, the capital of Dacia under the king Decebalus (last of the Dacian kings, and modern researchers believe that in merely his nickname, but the old dacian tongue is largely unknown due to the flurry of latinization that followed the conquest and wiped out the earlier traditions - even now, there are only about 15 words in modern Romanian that have a definite Dacian origin, as the modern tongue is of Latin origin (funny fact, even though I don't speak Portugues, I can easily understand up to 80% when spoken to in this language, and possibly even more when reading it, due to the similarities between the two tongues)
The second Sarmisegetuza is called Ulpia Traiana Sarmisegetuza, and was built by Trajan (j=i) adjacent to the site of the old capital after the former was razed to the ground in order to humiliate the vanquished. (More information on the matter, here:
[link] )
As an architecture major, I can tell you the building in the background of this pic is purely fantastic, and has nothing to do with either Dacian or Roman architecture styles - the closest resemblance I can find is with a series of poorly documented Hollywood props, since most of the elements in the picture have a distinct medieval Western European flavour.
As for extra pictures of Dacian dress, as well as arhitecture, I'm afraid there isn't much available on the Web (I could only find a few images, and most material coming from this site should be used with caution, as it involves re-creations for a computer game: [link] [link] [link] ) , but if you wish I could draw you some sketches detailingsome of the above mentioned subjects.
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willofthewisp [2005-04-06 05:16:20 +0000 UTC]
The armor in this picture caught my eye and I had to take a look. I used to make parts for this sort of lorica, for a guy who made armor for re-enactors. I shudder to think haw many little bronze washers, hooks, and hinges I have made. It is so rare to see historical art that is well researched. Thank you.
As for the picture itself; if there is anything wrong I think it lies in the overall composition, rather than in the detail or in your skill at rendering the image. We all wish that every piece of art we make were better, and we tend to see flaws in our own work that others could never find, even with determined examination.
Thanks for posting this.
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willofthewisp In reply to joriavlis [2005-04-06 17:01:37 +0000 UTC]
Yea I did make a lot of parts of loricae, and sheared out and filed lots of the plates too. I would be given a sheet of metal, a stack of patterns, and a part list. My job was to get as many as possible cut from the sheet, without waste, and still allow the sheer room to turn and cut. The washers I struck in a simple set of dies, and the hooks and hinges were beaten from sheet bronze. That shop also made canteens and ketels for the roman peoples, and lots of shield edging.
There isn't much historical on my gallery right now. Only the Calypso and the Ax. I will post something for you to look at in my scrapp book though I think you will like.
Cheers.
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willofthewisp In reply to joriavlis [2005-04-06 23:55:15 +0000 UTC]
It's there now. Look on willofthewispm scraps, and it should be on the upper left on the scrapbook gallery.
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GlaucoNobre [2004-12-18 11:25:34 +0000 UTC]
Belo trabalho!!
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ALVADALMA [2004-12-17 07:28:00 +0000 UTC]
ee pá isto está muito bom ...
na miniatura não parecia ..
hum tu estás a evoluir já vejo ...
Lenbrate só que os detalhes .. mesmo com o painter são resultado do trabalho a lapis .. de uma maneira ou de outra ...
E que tens sempre os tint brushes .. para não os erazurar .. e o pic underliyng colors como função dos layers para ajudar ainda mais isso ..
hum .. um grande abraço ...
ficarei há espera do teu melhor ..
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Eleithel [2004-12-13 11:39:27 +0000 UTC]
Dis-donc, t'as l'air de t'être sacrément docmenté ! O__o
Le dessin est sympa, j'aime beaucoup la colo (et y sont bien ses yeux!), y a juste la pose qui me fait un peu bizarre.
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Lightkataomi [2004-12-11 06:15:52 +0000 UTC]
Cets cool !!! jaime bien la colo !!! et le ciel est super!!^^
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luaboy [2004-12-10 15:10:32 +0000 UTC]
fixe!!! ^^
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Choobidoo [2004-12-08 21:06:55 +0000 UTC]
Sorry, pas "tient", mais "teint", excuse les fautes de frappe, j'ai tapé vite et je bosse en même temps! :\
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joriavlis In reply to Choobidoo [2004-12-08 23:49:02 +0000 UTC]
Merciiiiiiiiiiiii
Tu peux pas savoir comment ça motive, ton commentaire, ça me fiche la patate
Pour les "pierres" sur l'armure (lorica segmentata): ?__?
Les attaches? Lol. Voué, j'essaie de faire des persos masculins moins musclés, plus realistes (pas encore bishi, faut pas pousser, lol, ce sont des soldats ou des gladiateurs ).
Pas de spoil sur FMA, hein, pas de spoil, hein, j'en suis qu'a l'episode 31, moi
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Choobidoo In reply to joriavlis [2004-12-09 00:11:10 +0000 UTC]
Oui, désolée pour les approximations vestimentaires, j'étais encore toute retournée. C'est bien une armure, donc.
Sinon, pas de spoil, jamais! En tout cas pas après le 31, donc.
J'ai vu les eps dans le desordre, donc là je repars en arrière après avoir vu le 51 la semaine dernière. Mais je préfère, parce que quelques uns des "anciens" eps que j'ai vus sont à hurler de rire... Le 13 (Hawkeye qui tire sur son chien pour le dresser! ) ou le 16 sont des morceaux d'anthologie! Leurs retrouvailles avec "S... Senseeeiii", m'a éclatée!
"Doko e ikutsumori da... Eeeedo?! Omae no koudou wa subete Ou mitoushidayo!!" Lol, le ton de meurtre!
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Choobidoo [2004-12-08 21:04:50 +0000 UTC]
Joooooooooooooorrrrrrrrrrryyyyyyyyyyyyyy yyyyyyy. Je l'adore! J'ai failli le rater, parce que j'avais vider un brin prestement ma messagerie, et je me suis dis, "tiens, y avait pas une dev de Jory que je n'avais pas encore commentée? "
Il est tout simplement trop beau. Je t'épargne mes considérations sur l'aboutissement technique du CG, parce que, comme d'hab, c'est très beau (rien que les détails, les pierres sur le vêtement, ou l'amure? Comment on appelle ça, déjà?), les couleurs sont harmonieuses, plus de camaïeu que d'habitude, ce qui n'est pas pour me déplaire.
Passons. Mon truc c'est que je le trouve tout simplement très bishi, et qu'il me rappelle Edward de FMA, dans un episode que je viens de voir ou il se tient les cheveux en brun. drooooools.... C'est un coup de !!
, donc!
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Mahogany-Fay [2004-12-08 19:34:58 +0000 UTC]
Le ciel est très joliement fait ! ^__^
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yuripa-chan [2004-12-08 19:14:22 +0000 UTC]
T'es très fort en colo!!! o__O mais heu! fiufiu!!!
Et puis ça existe des cieux comme ça non?
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joriavlis In reply to yuripa-chan [2004-12-08 19:31:48 +0000 UTC]
Ben oué, ça existe o_o mais ça fait un peu chargé, non, un ciel comme ça? Merci merci du favheu ^______________________________^ !!!!! (sourire pikastyle).
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yuripa-chan In reply to joriavlis [2004-12-09 14:24:12 +0000 UTC]
mais de rien!! ^_________________________^
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