MaddKossack115 [2014-04-08 00:34:25 +0000 UTC]
Overall, the story is good, giving a reason for the kid Balrog "rescued" would end up inheriting his fighting style, and the character design definitely looks decent. The only problem is that said character looks nothing like the kid Balrog rescued - the skin is white instead of black, the hair was brown instead of blonde, the Shadaloo symbol was in the hands (and if it was in the head too, it'd only be in the forehead instead of the whole face)... and I'm pretty sure the voice-pitch and feminine eyebrows meant the kid was a girl, not a guy!
But yeah, asides from that, this character pitch was pretty good. Hope to see the story pitch tacked onto a character looking closer to the kid Balrog saved, or this character model having a different background attached.
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WDCain [2014-02-26 08:03:12 +0000 UTC]
A very original take on the boxer character. I really like the flair you gave him instead of relying on old stereotypes like most boxers that game after Balrog. Well done.
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