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Published: 2015-12-13 04:21:07 +0000 UTC; Views: 324; Favourites: 5; Downloads: 0
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here's natsuki in casual clothing :3 feedback is appreciatedRelated content
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I know XP This one isn't my best. I have plenty of better ones now though 
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nice to see you starting to develop as an artist.Β
Now here is a little critique to help you develop your skills further, her head just looks really weird to me. To me it looks a bit too wide and her eyes are a bit low in position as a result, I am aware that is part of the manga/anime style (though not as much as you might think for adult characters, kids you can kinda get away with it but the eyes are still a bit low n my opinion). Also, you might wanna take a look at real women when it comes to her human torso, I don't believe you gave enough impression of a ribcage to make that half look well human. I won't go over the hands because frankly I think most people suck at them, including me. As far as the torso Β (and to some extent the head) goes, here's a tutorial I found a while back that helped me greatlyΒ
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I know xD this one isn't my best you see the others?
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I saw some of them, some you did better others are about the sameΒ
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I love the choice of clothes xD
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Nice! I love the design of the Boobs- I mean eyes!
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Cody: Yeah.... eyes..... That is what I meant.
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sure it is... sure :3
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Cody: Yeah....
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Cody: also...I am not actually me. -falls over, being a cardboard cutout, with another cutout behind it- (IDFK.)
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ummm.... what?
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Cody: -has two pies hit him from each side-
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Cody: -chuckles-
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Cody: [Mind: I have a feeling some bad karma is going to take place...]
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*nomnomnomnomnomnomnomnomnomnomonomonomnomnomonomnomnomnom
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Cody: [Mind: yea...kinda expected that to happen.]
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Cody: -shrugs- eh, this aint That bad.
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Natsuki giggled and rubbed
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Cody: -blushes lightly-
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Cody: -lays down-
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Cody: -smiles back, and falls asleep-
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Cody: -blushes lightly-
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Cody: -smiles-
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Cody: -blushes lightly-
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Cody: -stretches-
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Cody: -smiles-
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