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Published: 2013-11-05 00:36:42 +0000 UTC; Views: 9723; Favourites: 458; Downloads: 166
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MAJOR edit: Taking on board the constructive criticism i got on the flatness of spitfire in the composition i completely reworked her to fit in to the scene a bit more and stand out better from the original. it was pretty bad I cannot believe I thought that was good 
I have not listened to a lot of the older classic brony songs in a while and decided to do so yesterday (since its after midnight when i am submitting this i need to start my pieces early in the day 
Well i guess you can see which song and animation i took inspiration from for this particular scene 
I would say that these two things contributed to me becoming a brony artist and really enjoying and experiencing what I can and will do.
Check out my FIM title card project 
Until next deviation LATERS Bronies 
drawn and coloured roughly in Photoshop CS6 with my Wacom tablet 5
Like ithate it its up to you not marmite
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Comments: 39
Something though is (I don't hate this.. I'm just saying..) Spitfire and the other pony to the left look flat. Everypony else in the photo are great, it's just them two. 
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Realy? SpitFire is ugly! Rainbow Dash is super Fabulos
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I don't understand why Spitfire is upset about this, that way, she can attract more fans and they'll love even more.
Plus, she doesn't look so bad.
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maybe she don't like when somepony yells at her like Photo Finish...or not.. idk
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Sorry, but for a minute I thought (Forgot her name..).. The Pony being a model was a cardboard cutout
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hhe, i like the concept here, it fits for spitfire and her reaction is perfect
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Nice work on this one. Yays for Photo Finish. She's one of my favorite ponies.
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There's Spitfire for ya.
I don't keep up with Equestria Daily much. What animation was this inspired by?
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It could be "Picture Perfect Pony", but I'm not entirely sure.
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LOL! I love her exasperation face xD It´s the same it make when I have to be taken a picture 
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This reminds me a lot of Thomas Hart Benton. I'm a little too afraid to critique it because he is one of my favorite American Artists.
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Hey there. I love this idea (and spitfire is one of my favorite ponies) but if I may make a suggestion. I think you should put a little shaddow between spitfire and tge background cuz right it kind of looks like spitfire just blends right into it, you know what I'm mean?
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If Spitfire hates this so much, she should just walk away.
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Love the vibrancy and the expressions and poses the ponies have, but your light sources are all over the place and your perspective is different for each section of the image. Try making a reference layer or two, one for perspective lines and another for lighting lines.
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wait... is that pinkie with short hair on the lower right???
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I dunno what it is, but some of the ponies (Spitfire and greenie on the left in particular) look rather flat, like they're cardboard cutouts.
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I think Spitfire's expression could possibly replace Squidward's for the mascot for the "I Really Wish I Wasn't Here Right Now" button.
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It's Picture Perfect Pony by Mando and Jan, isn't it? I got it right, right? ^^
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Yeah, that certainly was nice. ^^
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Very nice work. that said, the only thing that seems off, at least to me, is that Spitfire looks a little flat, like 2-D. Maybe it's all the lights on her taking away the shadows, but that's my opinion.
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On the bottom left? No, she's one of Photo Finish's assistants; her name is High Style.
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Picture perfect. The concept of the image itself is great, but what's standing out to me are all the background details you've included. Nice work on that. It really gives the room a story all its own.
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Every. LITTLE. Detail in this picture. Holy crap, great job!!!!!
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I love it, but Spitfire seems idk, flat? Maybe the pose and angle or that backdrop making her stand out (which should be good no?)
Idk better then anything i could ever do so still like it
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Good piece, Gonna be a pain figuring this song out
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