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Published: 2005-08-02 13:13:14 +0000 UTC; Views: 121; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 1
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Description Pulled away from its family,
left to part without a chance to say 'farewell'

It's forced into a vase with a drop of water,
scared and alone..

Knowing it will die soon
It turns to the sun for comfort

the sun kindly feeds it,
Before abandoning it.

Then it withers quickly
and dies alone.
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Comments: 3

ElijahSnow [2005-08-03 16:02:33 +0000 UTC]

it's good but abandoning is spelled with a b vĂ­s-a-vĂ­s line 8.

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MLESTRNGE [2005-08-02 17:12:34 +0000 UTC]

i like that! good work!

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joycy In reply to MLESTRNGE [2005-08-03 12:27:36 +0000 UTC]

thanx hun!

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