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Published: 2012-11-16 15:54:55 +0000 UTC; Views: 1530; Favourites: 25; Downloads: 53
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finals project for my advanced storyboarding class. it was supposed to be a car chase, but i'll let you figure it outRelated content
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Love the "God Damn it" Expression in the last panel. Nice Work.
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(concerning the last four panels) you could make the note to the Director/DP on the boards, to flop the camera
and let the audience live with it, and learn from it.
Bend the rules, it's ok to break "formula" chains in the nature of our creativity.
GREAT WORK!
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haha thx, lines are pretty cool
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Well that frame into the tunnel could use and extra step for a smooth transference from going right to turning and moving left. It is a little to quick making it look odd. But I like the concept in general.
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yea i really should fix that soon, thx!
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This isn't much of a critique, but those last four panels or so changed screen direction. He's heading toward the Screen Right entering the tunnel, and then when we're inside the tunnel, he's heading screen left.
I get chewed out for flopping screen direction all the time at work.
Other than that, it's pretty good!
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haha yea, my professor said the same thing. he said i should add one more panel between that transition to fix the problem. thx though!
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I will have to agree with him. Everything else reads so well. The pace the movement. I like it. It's just the tunnel part should be reversed and it would be even better
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