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Published: 2013-10-10 13:37:46 +0000 UTC; Views: 2316; Favourites: 92; Downloads: 38
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I have tried to Incorporate some of the suggestions from my friend .Unsure if I was successful. The only thing I may add is a necklace
Painted with Gimp
Let me know what you think
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Sexy vamp. Nice job. Vampires are always such messy eaters.
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Thank you and welcome to DA, just visited your gallery and recommend anyone reading this to visit you.
Amazing work!
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Thanks to you, I am honored!!!
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Just awesome, thought it was a real picture based off of the thumbnail!
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Thanks, that means a lot, this has gone through a lot of changes to get where it is now.
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excellent work! don't you think the necklace makes the wrinkles l little easier? ^_^
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I didn't work much on the wrinkles, mainly just the chains and necklace.
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Thanks, the necklace credit goes entirely to you.
I tried out some chain brushes thinking it would be easier but in the end it didn't work
Used a basic round brush for it
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isnt that supposed to be vampire ?
a succubus is something entirely different
( unless you were going with some sort of vampire sexuality symbolism in which case ignore the vampire remark )
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You are right, I need to rename it, just came up with something quick.
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*lights a cigar* i love it when im right
about the picture
so this was done with a touchpad only ?
impressive ...most impressive
my touch pad usually fights me
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now now don't gloat. Not nice.
Yes all I have is a laptop and use the touchpad, maybe one day I'll try a tablet. To much coffe can be a problem.
Thank you very much.
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*flicks the cigar away *
i dont like cigars anyway
never tried an external mouse ?
i cant imagine working with just a touch pad the idea alone is ....unthinkable
it seems so restrictive
then again an good artist doesnt need great materials they rise to the occasion and work with what they have and make great art in spite of the limitations
the limitations just spurn good artists on to do better
all the fancy material in the world can not replace talent
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Wow, thanks again, tried a mouse, wasn't a fan of the rodent.
You are awesome, great sense of humor!
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i generally prefer rodentia touch pads make me feel cramped
well i have a ....interesting sense of humor i suppose
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Like how she looks all rumpled and sated, like she's just had great sex - and/or a great meal, wherever the one may end and the other begin for someone like her. She might be in a good mood, she may be too lazy to kill you just now, you may just get out of this encounter alive, but she isn't safe by any stretch of the imagination.
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sorry I haven been keeping up. way too much schooling. necklace no prob I have an idea for that. every thing looks good. the lighting is getting a little chaotic though. still vary good ^^
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No problem, I made some changes here. I modified the dress where it comes down on the right breast area, changed the lower shape closer to what you just posted. Those are the good things. On the negative the creases are all wrong, not flowing right and the lighting is still off to put it mildly.
I like your necklace, you suggested it way back and I tried it. My problem is doing a chain versus a rope, that type of necklace would require a chain and I'm not sure I can do that right. It looks like you have it attached to the dress I like that idea and might help me redo the creases. But that is why I went with the pearls (my wife hates the pearls), it was the easier way to go.
At this point I needed a break from this, those dam creases are killing me.
When I start up again I will take another shot at a ruby necklace, you make things look so easy.
Might be a couple days though, I needed to stop before I ruin the whole thing.
I'll drop you a note after I work on it. Knowing what needs to be done and doing it are 2 different things lol.
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hey could we exchange files? I'll give you the necklace and can I have your redone dress? and yah its was suppose to be attached to the dress. I just realize what would make it easier to do wrinkles. and the would be something holding the dress right there.
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Looks less like a succubus and more like a vampire. This impression is due to more than the teeth and blood (which are a big sign saying "Vampire") but also the background being a graveyard (conjuring images of the dead and undead).
Your creature is slinky, but a lifeless slinky. Alluring but in a predatory way.
A physical succubus would hang around a more lively place, probably the most lively one present, due in no small part to the energy she steals.
She would be more like a Venus flytrap luring in with sex rather than power as you have presented here.
Still I guess the mythology can be made to suit. So if this is your version of a succubus then more power to you (might still need to flesh it out a bit more though, personal opinion, but the teeth aren't enough.
Still, your revised picture shows a great improvement in texture of the cloth, shading of the flesh and the background really brings her to life (pardon the pun)!
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Thank you so much for your input, yes it is probably misnamed. I just came up with something quick.
There was a total lack of planning on this, when I started I wasn't completely sure where I was going with it.
Mainly I was just trying to do a figure that wasn't as cartoonish as all of my previous work, so this was just an experiment on improving and getting a realistic figure. I looked through my own work and did not like what I saw so it's a personal quest to improve on what I do.
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Thank you, it's not finished yet, I still don't like some things. The dress isn't right, lighting ect.
I needed to take a break from it for a while. Some good friends have been giving great advice that I need to implement.
As a hobbiest I have been trying to step up a level and somewhat achieved that here. I see many things done wrong in this so I'm learning.
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well as an artist, you are your harshest critique, but, if you werent, there would be no such thing as improvement, and quite frankly I think this is already a high standard of art
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Thank you, that means a lot to me.
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Thank you, that means a lot. Thanks also for the fav
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It was nice to see the growth from the images. The background is a nice touch.
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Thank you so much, the background was the easy part
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holy cow! excellent work man!
the background looks great!
the fence is genius be cause its not a solid wall you don't have to make it look like her hair or her are is scrunched up.
the wrinkles on the right side of her dress look really great.
I think a blood red necklace would look super great.
but I think the nose, lips, arm and hair still need some work.
can I do some more stuff to it?
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Absolutely, I have just uploaded it without the signature.
I was going to work off the other one but separating layers became to much work. The signature also was an issue. The dress creases still needs adjusting under the breast area but that is a new layer so that will be easier. I did work on the face area but the lighting layers above it overruled it
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