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Published: 2016-04-06 05:43:09 +0000 UTC; Views: 341; Favourites: 10; Downloads: 0
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My remembrance of you is nothing more than,My imagination painting a canvas with perfection as its medium,
Your true self I have long forgotten,
The waves of nostalgia have since washed away blemish from the shores of my mind,
To me the story of us is this:
God brought you to me, an angel,
And you held my happiness in the palm of your hands,
But you taught me that angels were made for leaving,
After all that’s why God gave them wings.
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Comments: 6
You took a long story and boiled it down into as few words as you probably could, while keeping the complexity.
Very well done!
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This is a lovely poem ^^ the words you used are fairly beautiful
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Thank you so much! I really appreciate comments more than anything else.
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I wrote a poem similar to this, except I put myself in the position of the angel and it was a lot darker, hahaha. This is beautifully written, as are your other works.
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What was your poem called? I'd Love to see it!
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It has a simple title, haha. It is called Fate .
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