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Shochu-Tachi [2015-07-14 23:33:01 +0000 UTC]
wow! he looks really nice!
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Juacamo In reply to RatchetJak [2015-07-09 02:38:44 +0000 UTC]
Hear that Koya, you got a fan hehehe.
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RatchetJak In reply to Juacamo [2015-07-10 20:28:57 +0000 UTC]
So freakin' cute xD
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RatchetJak In reply to Juacamo [2015-07-11 06:24:04 +0000 UTC]
You have the best giants <3
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blcksheep [2015-07-08 18:19:54 +0000 UTC]
At least he's free now.
Great full body picture.
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Juacamo In reply to blcksheep [2015-07-08 18:25:59 +0000 UTC]
Thanks hehehehe
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MrKTE [2015-07-08 06:44:17 +0000 UTC]
Awesome stuff as always, Juac!
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Juacamo In reply to MrKTE [2015-07-08 07:14:54 +0000 UTC]
Thanks KC hehehe
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Osric09 [2015-07-08 06:37:48 +0000 UTC]
Poor guy sure had it rough... I hope he will get a happy ending down the line.
XD Must be rather hard to work with a mute character though? He can't even give the epic speech about freeing his people and bringing peace and justice! *is shot*
He could use an empath/telepath interpreter for sure.
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Juacamo In reply to Osric09 [2015-07-08 06:41:49 +0000 UTC]
The point of him not talking is to make it so that every action I have him do in the story speak louder than any words hehehe. And I've worked with mute characters before hehehe.
Thanks a lot though hehe, what did you think of his description and people's abilities?
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Osric09 In reply to Juacamo [2015-07-08 06:50:46 +0000 UTC]
Well, I surely wouldn't manage to write a mute char... with visuals, expressions and gestures are easier to convey... but it'd take either a huge amount of words, or of telling, or both for that to work... especially if he's the protagonist and not just a sometimes character.
Their abilities are cool... surely can make for some cool giants, but it does make sense that those very same powers can be turned against them as they are right now. Of course Kota much more so after the experiment, I guess?
His story is rather sad, and I do wonder how he'll manage to change things.
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Juacamo In reply to Osric09 [2015-07-08 07:08:40 +0000 UTC]
Yeah it's difficult, but not so difficult if you keep the feelings and expressions brief. Like I did in my recent story I posted.
Since you're a wonderful writer and can pick up on subtle hints and I'm sure you're really curious. I'll tell you two hints as to how his story's going to go down hehe. Yes Kota is capable of much more after the experiment. The experiment had little to do with the body's structure directly. In fact the scientist's professional field was memories, and studying spirits and past lives. He kept a front as a biologist which helped a lot in making an alchemical and magical elixir that can help the body recall the pasts of the soul within. As I said Whelp is not the real name of Kota's race. Secondly, Kota Koya, the name. I used that name on purpose hehehe. It's no coincidence. If you figure it all out tell me in a note hehehe.
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